Since he came to New York. Because my dog loves it. Unless you see me. Is there anything wrong with these sentences? All of these sentences end too quickly.

Slides:



Advertisements
Similar presentations
The people Look for some people. Write it down. By the water
Advertisements

Goldilocks and the Three Bears.
Sentence Fragments and Run-On Sentences
Word List A.
Dolch Words.
By: Ryan.A. Glasser. Mama Mama I'm Mad at MY Llama By: Ryan.A. Glasser.
First 100 High Frequency Words
Chapter 1 My Dad’s Home I don’t remember this place, I thought. It isn’t home. Not my home. My home is far away, in New Zealand. With Mum. This is a.
AVOIDING FRAGMENTS AND RUN-ONS Eighth Grade Language Arts Sara Wohltjen BEGIN.
Sentence Fragments. Because my cat loves it. (so what ?) Since he came to New York. (what has been doing?) Unless you see me. (what will happen?) These.
FRAGMENTS, RUN-ONS, AND COMMA SPLICES QUIZ #2, Part 1 of 5 Directions: Write C if the sentence is complete and punctuated correctly. For each fragment,
Fluency Phrases. at the store his dog to my house.
Editing & Polishing Your Study Post-Graduate Research Module.
Common Sentence Errors Make your Writing More Clear and Interesting!
What’s happening to Bella? ?????? On Monday, Sam took Bella his dog for a nice long walk. Bella loves to run during her walks, but today, Bella was SOOOOOO.
Foundations of Writing
By: Aleeyah Bonner. It was the first day of 4th grade for me. I was very nervous and was hoping that my mom would let me stay home today. “Alana! Come.
Bedrock Word Phrases Grade 1 After you have learned all your Bedrock sight words, practice these phrases to keep them fresh in your mind. Your teachers.
Dangling and Misplaced Modifiers Excuse me, your modifier is dangling.
Theme. Think about the last story you read and ask yourself these questions: 1. What was the story about? 2. Did the main character learn something? 3.
Run-On and Fragments Mrs. Burhenn. Fragments  Threw the baseball. (Who threw the baseball?)  Mark and his friends. (What about them?)  Around the corner.
Fragments and Run-on sentences
Phrases, Clauses, and Sentence Types
Sentence Fragments A fragment fails to be a sentence because it cannot stand by itself—does not contain an independent clause. Does not have subject +
Avoiding Sentence Fragments
Run-On Sentences Time to Master!.
Sentence Variety: Sentence Types and Patterns
As we talk about these grammar basics today, please take your own notes. Format your notes like this: (key words in left column) complete sentence (notes/definitions.
Parts of a Sentence Subjects and Predicates. Complete Sentences In order for a sentence to be complete it needs to have two basic parts. – a subject –
Created by Verna C. Rentsch and Joyce Cooling Nelson School
FRAGMENTS AND RUN-ONS Identifying and Correcting Sentence Errors  Teri Tosspon Chapter 8, pg 142.
Sight Words List 1 Mr. Matthews Grade One can.
Complete Dolch Sight Word List Preprimer through Third
Power Point Sight Words
Grammar Guide How to identify and fix run-on sentences.
Fragments If a sentence lacks a subject, verb, or a complete thought, it is a fragment.
Scott Foresman Reading Street Word Wall Word List First Grade Kindergarten & Supplement Words Included.
The Monkey and the Pig. Once upon a time in Japan, a man had a monkey. People paid to see the monkey dance.
SENTENCE FRAGMENTS.
blanch rudimentary surreal mien As we talk about these grammar basics today, please take your own notes. Format your notes like this: (key words.
1-) COMMA SPLICE: I did not eat enough this evening, I feel hungry. CORRECTIONS: I did not eat enough this evening [. ] I feel hungry. Note: To separate.
District 200 High frequency words
Learn to SPOT them Learn to REWRITE them Learn to AVOID them Sentence Fragments.
I.
Goldilocks and the Three Bears
Sentential Errors In Writing 1- Comma Splice 2- Run-on Sentence 3- Non-parallel Sentence 4- Sentence Frangments.
REVIEW Writing 4. Happy Punctuation Day!  September 24, 2014.
Sentence Fragments and Run-Ons This PowerPoint presentation will review the basics of correct sentence structure and help you to identify and correct Sentence.
FRAGMENTS AND RUN-ONS Identifying and Correcting Sentence Errors Chapter 8, pg 142.
Sentence vs Fragment! *Identification, Classification, Application *Comparing & Contrasting *Altering text to edit/revise fragments.
Do Now: Hand in character chart HW. Open up to your Grammar section and answer “What elements make up a complete sentence? What is a sentence fragment?
Sight Words.
Prepositions Relate nouns or pronouns to other words; Prepositions can show where people or things are located. They can also show time relationships.
A Day to Remember The Past Simple Tense. 1 One afternoon last summer, my good friend Jane came round and invited me to go on a bike ride with her. I thought.
Run On Sentences 9 th Grade. Look at the following sentences: I saw a teacher who cares. I saw a teacher. Who cares?
FRY PHRASES Learn these words and you will be well on your way to becoming a great reader!!!
Created by Kathryn Reilly Correcting Sentence Fragments.
Understanding Fragments and Run-ons. Review: What is a Sentence? Remember that a sentence has a subject & a verb, and it expresses a complete thought.
Wolf Eyes. all am at ate into that like there.
The Building Blocks of a Sentence. Write the answer you selected. Write why you would not select the other answers. Warm-Up.
Oxford Words
复习巩固 : 动词的过去式和过去分词 blow blew blown draw drew drawn grow grew grown know knew known throw threw thrown fly flew flown buy bought bought bring brought brought.
Chapter 1 Fox’s Bike Fox liked to show off for the girls. “Oh my!” said the girls.
Sentence Fragments. You might be wondering: "What is a sentence?" A sentence consists of 3 things: 1 subjectthe person, place, or thing performing or.
ESSENTIAL WORDS.
Avoiding Sentence Fragments
Avoiding Sentence Fragments
Grades K-2 Reading High Frequency Words
Your First Paragraph This is called the introduction.
Quarter 1.
Presentation transcript:

Since he came to New York. Because my dog loves it. Unless you see me. Is there anything wrong with these sentences? All of these sentences end too quickly. After reading these sentences, the reader asks questions because he/she needs more information.

These sentences have incomplete ideas and end too quickly. They are called sentence fragments. Sentence FragmentThe Reader Asks... Since he came to New York.Since he came, what (has he been doing)? Because my dog loves it.Because the dog loves it, (so what)? Unless you see me.Unless you see me, what (will happen)?

Take a look at the following sentences: I slept. Jim flew the plane. He cried. Are these sentence fragments? The answer is no. Now, you may ask, “These last three sentences are shorter than the first three. Why aren’t the last three sentence fragments?” That’s a great question…

A sentence fragment has nothing to do with size or amount of words. A sentence fragment is a sentence that is incomplete. A complete sentence contains: 1. Subjectthe person, place, or thing performing or doing the action (who or what the sentence is about) 2. Verbthe action 3. Complete ideathe reader isn't left waiting for another word

Take a look at this sentence: I hit the ball. Subject = I Verb = hit Is it a complete idea? Yes Therefore, this is a good sentence.

Another example: Birds fly. Subject = Birds Verb = fly Is it a complete idea? Yes Therefore, this is a good sentence.

Another example: I take. Subject = I Verb = take Is it a complete idea? No What did you take? The sentence is not a complete thought. 

What's a sentence fragment? A sentence fragment is a sentence that lacks a subject or verb, or it does not contain a complete idea. Can run to the market Eloise on the bus If you

Another possibility… Murray takes the train to school Mom rides the bus. Subject = Murray AND Mom Verb = takes AND rides Is it a complete idea? It is TWO complete ideas. Therefore, this is a run-on sentence. 

How do you fix a sentence fragment? There are 3 methods you can use…

Method 1: Attach the sentence fragment to another sentence. That other sentence could be before or after the sentence fragment. Sentence FragmentFixed and now a complete sentence After seeing the doctor.I felt much better after seeing the doctor. -or- After seeing the doctor, I felt much better.

Method 2: Add a subject, verb, or both to make the sentence complete. Sentence FragmentFixed and now a complete sentence Under the bed.I found my socks under the bed.

Method 3: Take away the word or phrase that makes it a sentence fragment. Sentence FragmentFixed and now a complete sentence While Fred was in Paris.Fred was in Paris.

Practice The following paragraph contains five sentence fragments. Find the sentence fragments and circle them. Then correct them using one of the above three methods. Write your corrections underneath the paragraph. After I had gotten up. I ate my breakfast. While I was eating breakfast. I heard a squeaking sound at my door. It was a little puppy that was crying. I wept. It was really cute. That I picked it up and took it inside in order to give the puppy a big bowl of warm milk and a soft blanket. I took the day off so that I could take him to the veterinarian. The vet told me he was fine. Because I had given him what he needed: milk and a warm blanket. He still needed a home. I asked all my friends to take him. They wanted the little guy. However, they couldn't keep pets in their apartments. By the time we got home. Now, he is my pet and friend.

Practice Possible answers: ( After I had gotten up), I ate my breakfast. (While I was eating breakfast), I heard a squeaking sound at my door. It was a little puppy that was crying. I wept. It was really cute. (That I picked it up and took it inside in order to give the puppy a big bowl of warm milk and a soft blanket.) I took the day off so that I could take him to the veterinarian. The vet told me he was fine. (because I had given him what he needed: milk and a warm blanket). He still needed a home. I asked all my friends to take him. They wanted the little guy. However, they couldn't keep pets in their apartments. (By the time we got home), he was happy. Now, he is my pet and friend.