Critical Essay

 Choose a novel or short story in which the fate of the main character is important in conveying the writer’s theme.  Explain what you consider the theme to be and discuss how effectively the fate of the character conveys it.  In your answer you must refer closely to the text and to at least two of: theme, plot, characterisation, setting, or any other appropriate feature.

 Choose a novel or short story in which the fate of the main character is important in conveying the writer’s theme.  Explain what you consider the theme to be and discuss how effectively the fate of the character conveys it.  In your answer you must refer closely to the text and to at least two of: theme, plot, characterisation, setting, or any other appropriate feature.

 Gatsby’s fate- exposed as a bootlegger, loses Daisy, is shot by George Wilson and almost no-one attends his funeral.  Main theme- corruption of the American Dream: how the admirable (if unrealistic) desire for renewal and self-improvement has been tainted by ‘the foul dust’ of materialism and entrenched inequality.  Evaluate how well Gatsby’s fate highlights the corrupt/ unrealistic nature of the American Dream in the 1920s.

 Author and title  Respond to task  Demonstrate that you understand the main theme  Give an idea of your line of argument

 Jay Gatsby, the flawed hero of F. Scott Fitzgerald’s ‘The Great Gatsby, meets with a rather ignominious fate. He is unmasked as a bootlegger, abandoned by his great love and, after a case of mistaken identity, shot and left face down in his swimming pool. Just as Fitzgerald portrays the American Dream as corrupted and unattainable for many in 1920s America, Gatsby’s own dreams have been corrupted and crushed by cold, brutal reality.

 Introduction  Six main body paragraphs  Conclusion

 Gatsby’s love for Daisy (his American Dream) and her choosing Tom. This would most likely cover at least two paragraphs.  Gatsby’s death (perhaps also Tom’s role in it). Identified by his yellow car, which he bought to attract Daisy. Yellow/ gold symbolises old money.  His funeral. This reinforces his isolation. Consider this isolation in terms of the American Dream. Gatsby’s capacity for wonder, his desire for something beyond the material, leaves him alienated in the spiritually barren, materialistic world of 1920s America.

 Use of setting to develop theme- East and West Egg; Valley of Ashes. Connect this to Gatsby’s death.  Evaluate how well Gatsby’s fate conveys the corruption of the American Dream.

 Topic Sentence  Brief explanation/ expansion  Evidence  Analysis/ Evaluation  Link back to task

 The resolution of the conflict between Tom and Gatsby comes when Daisy chooses Tom. Throughout the novel, Fitzgerald has associated Gatsby’s love for Daisy with the American Dream, which was originally about discovery, individualism and the pursuit of happiness. Gatsby invents a past and persona in a bid to overcome the difference in social status between him and Daisy. Indeed, the novel’s title, which makes him sound like a magician or illusionist like The Great Houdini, is a reference to this. However, Fitzgerald also uses Gatsby’s love for Daisy to highlight the corruptions of the American dream that have occurred in 1920s America. The rampant materialism of Daisy’s lifestyle mirrors the increased importance of consumerism in American culture:  “Her voice is full of money.”  Fitzgerald’s unusual imagery, as voiced by Gatsby when describing Daisy, is also a successful use of irony. Gatsby believes that he is describing her in a positive way. However, the readers realise that Fitzgerald views money as one of the reasons for America’s moral decay in the 1920s. Therefore, his imagery here associates Daisy, and therefore Gatsby’s love for her, with that. I also feel that there is an implication here that Gatsby’s love for Daisy is partly a result of his attraction to her status. Yet, ironically she looks down on Gatsby’s own class, as represented by West Egg:  “She was appalled by West Egg...by its raw vigor that chafed...and by the too obtrusive fate that herded its inhabitants along a short-cut from nothing to nothing.”  Such arrogance and snobbery are indicative of Daisy’s character and, for me, are the real reasons that she chooses Tom. I believe that Fitzgerald is not portraying her as choosing a person, but rather a set of values.