By: Jocelyn Bello- Paez Long Essay Writing By: Jocelyn Bello- Paez

Things to do…. 1. Deconstruct the essay prompt. S ubject N umber of parts/ Categories A ction Word P eriod of time I nclude words in essay

Examples: Compare and contrast the role of religion in the founding of the Spanish colonies in the 16th century with that of the English colonies in the 17th century. S ubject N umber of parts/ Categories A ction Word P eriod of time I nclude words in essay

SNAPI Analyze the influence of TWO of the following on the development of a Democratic society in the English colonies during the period from 1607-1745. Bacon’s Rebellion Enlightenment Great Awakening Zenger Case S ubject N umber of parts/ Categories A ction Word P eriod of time I nclude words in essay

SNAPI Analyze the impact of geography and the environment on the development of at least two different regions of the English colonies along the Atlantic coast in the 17th and 18th centuries. S ubject N umber of parts/ Categories A ction Word P eriod of time I nclude words in essay

Two Sentence Thesis The first sentence should answer the question stating your opinion or the stance you will take. Basically you are answering the question directly with your opinion. It should include words like clearly, inevitable, strongly, among others, words that make the sentence an opinion. The second sentence should give at least three reasons supporting your opinion or stance.  Will always go at the end of the intro paragraph.

Words to make thesis statements opinions: Compare and Contrast thesis statements: Evident Noticeable Pronounced Striking Deserve Merit Thorough rigourous Clear Remarkable Striking Pronounced

Words to make thesis statements opinions: Proposition thesis statements: Beginning of thesis Notion Belief Thought Idea proposition End of thesis statement Fascinating intereseting Thought provoking provocative

Prompt#1 Compare and contrast the role of religion in the founding of the Spanish colonies in the 16th century with that of the English colonies in the 17th century.

Thesis Example #1 Clearly, the role of religion in the founding of the Spanish colonies in the 16th century was particularly different than the role it played in the founding of the English colonies in the 17th century. The role of religion in the founding of the Spanish colony was more of a missionary one in comparison to the English colonies which were founded on the basis of religious persecution in England as seen in the Plymouth and Massachusetts bay colonies. 

Prompt #2 Analyze the impact of geography and the environment on the development of at least two different regions of the English colonies along the Atlantic coast in the 17th and 18th centuries.

Example #2 The impact of geography and the environment was more devastating in the development of the colonies in the Chesapeake Region compared to the colonies in the New England region. The geographical location of Jamestown made it difficult to establish itself due to the marshy swamp conditions while the colder climate of the Middle Colonies along with arable land made there development more successful. 

Good Essay Writing Identify specific individuals Use active verbs Use descriptive words Explain who did what and why do not use overgeneralized statements as “mistakes were made” be specific.

Overgeneralized words Every, everyone, everybody Any, anyone, anybody None, no one, nothing, nobody All, sometimes, often, always, never, most, many some, very Weak nouns: Thing, stuff, person people. Weak verbs( use action verbs instead) Are, was, were, have, has, do, does, did,

Weak Adjectives: Good, bad, great, super, nice. Weak Phrases: There is/are It was/ were Slang awesome, cool, sucks, so, aint Contractions

Do not use the following words. Good Very Etc. I feel Many people Gonna Things Got In my opinion There are Really Kind of I think A lot Like In conclusion.