Writing Description: Concrete Sensory Details

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Writing Description: Concrete Sensory Details

Definition Concrete means specific, solid Sensory means relating to any of the senses. Notice in the following two columns how the images in Column I are general and have little sensory appeal, while the examples in Column II are concrete because they appeal strongly to the senses.

Examples A tie: A red silk tie with bright yellow daisies A chair: A mahogany rocking chair that cracks and groans

Now you try: The ceiling A locker A pen

One way to create pictures is to use the exact word you want rather than a general term that needs too many descriptive words to make the picture specific. Readers prefer the words ELM or OAK to tree because they get an added identification for the object through the exactness of the name.

Hammer, pliers, screwdriver Example Tool: Hammer, pliers, screwdriver

Now try the following words: Car Book Flower

Describing your world Descriptive writing is a way of capturing strong images and events and exploring them for yourself and others. The tools available to you are your powers of observation and your command of sensory words (words that appeal to the five senses: sight, touch, sound, taste and smell). The list on the next few slides gives examples of precise words that appeal to the various senses:

Sight There are hundreds of color names beyond the usual ones. One way to help with this would be to look in your box of Crayola crayons to see the names they have assigned to each color. Instead of red, try using pink, salmon, coral, maroon, burgundy, crimson or scarlet. Shapes can be almost anything: flat, hexagonal, fat, thin, tapering, hollow or flared. The appearance of an object or person can vary widely: spotted, transparent, sturdy, spindly, expensive, exotic or delicate.

Sound You can go far beyond sounds that are just loud or soft: noisy, screeching, echoing, thunderous, or whispering

Touch Touch is a bit more difficult to define, but here are some examples of touch words: slippery, coarse, velvety, sticky, crisp, scratchy, or soft

Smell and Taste Here are some smell and taste words related to foods: rancid, rotten, burnt, sour, sweet, bitter or fresh.

Sight Sound Touch Smell Taste Using your senses, list the details that describe your favorite room: Sight Sound Touch Smell Taste