Qiushi Experimental Middle School---Nina Give suggestions on how to stay fit Writing

1,What’s daddy pig’s problem? 2,What did he do to solve the problem?

1,What did he do to solve the problem? He is too fat, he can’t even touch his toe. 1,What’s daddy pig’s problem? It’s ________ for him to stay fit. important

Because he gave up easily. 3,Did he succeed? Why?

Exercise Mind Habit Food how to stay fit ★ Tips: when you are writing a composition, try to think out some phrases first.

How to give suggestions ★ Tips: Then you can put them into sentences. Sentence patterns

Write some suggestions on how to stay fit. (At least 5-6 sentences) firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly/ finally, on (the)one hand,on the other hand and, besides, what’s more… for example, such as… because, so, so that, although… ★ Tips: Use linking words and transition words to join your sentences together.

Beginning Main partEnding Purpose, Introduction （总起全文） Conclusion （总结） Elucidation ( 阐述，说明） How to stay fit ?

Purpose and Introduction Beginning It’s ________ for sb. to do.If…Here are some suggestions

Ending Conclusion In a word, Above all ( 总之） There is a saying/As the saying goes:“…”

1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 2. Happiness lies first of all in health. 3. Health is better than wealth. 4. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 5. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 世上无难事，只怕有心人 。 幸福首先在于健康。 ★ Tips: Choose a saying for your composition.

Beginning Main partEnding How to stay fit It’s important for you to… Here are…If Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Fourthly/Finally for example, such as besides, what’s more in a word, above all As the saying goes… because, so, in order to

Daddy pig: Best wishes to you! Yours, xxx

Handwriting ○ excellent ○ average ○ weak Structure (3 parts) Mistake ○ complete ○ not complete ○ no mistake ○ few mistakes ○ many mistakes Good sentence ○ Linking words ○ ○ Excellent ○ Average ○ Weak

Homework 1.Exchange your composition with your partner and try to evaluate the composition. 2. Write another composition like this one (two topics for you to choose) How to learn English well? How to protect the environment?

It's important for you to stay fit. Here are some suggestions that can help you. There are many ways to stay fit. First of all, you should take some exercise every day, such as running and riding a bike. Secondly, you’d better eat more healthy food instead of junk food. Thirdly, don’t watch TV for too long, it’s bad for your health. Fourthly, try to keep a good state of mind. In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit, if you put your heart into it. As the saying goes, “ where there is a will, there is a way.” I wish you to be healthy in the future.

It's important for you to stay fit. There are many ways to stay fit. In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit, ★ Tips: Write a topic sentence for each part, and try to use some good sentences. Here are some suggestions that can help you.

Try (not) to Doing …is a good way to do… smile as often as possible spend some time with … keep up a good state of mind

Don’t … You’d better (not ) do… get enough sleep …or …

Doing …is a good way to do… Why not /Why don’t you do… Don’t give up easily.

It’s a good idea to do… You’d better (not) do… instead of fried food

Evaluate ( 评价） A good composition should be… be complete 内容完整 be grammatical 无语法，拼写错误 be formal 书写规范 be fluent and graceful 语句流畅优美

1.In a word, it’s not so _________ to stay fit, if you put your heart into it. 2.In a word, if you _______________ ______________, you can stay fit In a word,…

1.If you are not healthy, you ’ll ___________________. 2. If you want to stay fit, I’ll _______________________. become ill easily If…