Huzhou High School Xu Zhixia
Wish How I wish to have a rest!
Wish How I wish to have a rest! A: Hey! Who … see in the picture? B: In the picture, I can see … A: What … doing? B:… A: How … he feel? Why? B:… A: What … eager for..? B:…
a boy student, carry…, on ones way to… exhausted, because of; be eager… How I wish to have a rest! It is obvious/clear that… (who, ) (see…doing…) (so…that…) (and, ) (So…that…, ) (and, ) From the picture, I can see… (understanding: picture life) (too much study, burden)
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useful phrases: wonderful sentences: be occupied with live up to be fed up with lead a …life let alone … Obviously,… As for me,… Moreover,…
Understanding ( ) 1.Controlled writing 2.Open-ended writing Description Feelings Opinions Reasons Suggestions …
As is shown in the picture, a boy, who is fully occupied with too many training classes after school, cannot even spare a minute to do what he likes. He is so unwilling and exhausted that he feels quite upset. Obviously, students nowadays are suffering a lot to live up to their parents expectations.
As for me, Im totally against it because it is a waste of time to attend too many training classes. We may be fed up with them easily, let alone make progress. Moreover, I suggest that a balanced way between study and out-door activities should be found and only in this way can we lead a healthy and happy life.
medal /efficient study football / skateboard do well in study be free to do activities Its what I want! smiling face / music happy active / healthy
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Its what I want!
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