Complete plan Complete introduction Start main body

An essay is like a hamburger…. Introduction Main body Conclusion A hamburger needs both parts of the bun and the burger otherwise it’s not a proper hamburger. An essay needs an introduction, main body of argument and a conclusion otherwise it’s not a proper essay.

How to write an 8 mark essay It needs to have an:  INTRODUCTION – Set the context and state what you will mention in the main body.  MAIN BODY – A clear line of argument that develops points of recall to help answer the question.  CONCLUSION – make an overall judgement and briefly summarise your main arguments.

How is it marked? 6 marks Up to 6 marks for relevant points of KU (recall) 2 marks Up to 2 marks for structure – having an introduction, main body and conclusion.

How do I start it?  Take time to READ the question to work out what it is asking.  Write a short PLAN before you start the essay to note down what you will talk about.  Around 20mins How long will I have in the exam?

PLAN Intro – context = WWI , new methods of warfare used to break the stalemate of trench warfare, other factors also played a part in the Allied victory such as German home front. Main body - Tanks, Gas, portable machine guns, use of aircraft, use of motor vehicles, dreadnought, naval blockade, developments in artillery, other factors such as declining morale on German home front, US entering the war. Conclusion – ‘In conclusion, the use of new technology Played a significant part in leading the Allies to victory over Germany. However, other factors also contributed such as…..

Read the question 1. Why was the Kaiser so unpopular by 1918? 2. How important was the naval arms race as a cause of WWI? 3. How important was the rivalry between Austria-Hungary and Russia as a cause of WWI? 4. To what extent was discontent with the Weimar Republic the main factor in the Nazi rise to power? 5. To what extent was the appeal of Hitler and the Nazis the main factor in the Nazi rise to power in 1933?

P.E.E in your paragraphs! Point – Make your point. Explain – Explain it. Example – Give an example. For example: Chemical weapons were used for the first time in WWI to devastating effect. Three types of gas were used in battle; mustard, chlorine and phosgene gas. The gas was released either in canisters using the wind direction or fired in gas shells towards the enemy. Gas was a terrifying weapon that killed around 90,000 soldiers during WWI but the invention of the gas mask limited its effectiveness.

CONTEXT What is it? Everything that is happening around the time of the issue/event in question. What happened before and what happened after? What was also happening at that time.

Possible introduction WWI was fought between 1914 and Britain, France and Russia were victorious in 1918 as Germany was unable to continue fighting. The stalemate that was characteristic of the trenches on the Western Front was alleviated using a number of new weapons such as....

P.E.E in your paragraphs! Point – Make your point. Explain – Explain it. Example – Give an example. For example: The Kaiser was very unpopular with the German population towards the end of WWI. The military in particular, no longer supported him and refused to follow orders. This was shown in the naval mutiny at Kiel in October 1918 which acted as a catalyst for mass civil discontent.

Weaknesses of the Weimar government Weak constitution (e.g. Proportional Representation and Article 48) Unable to prevent extremist politics. Left-wing rebellion (e.g. Spartacist) Right-wing rebellion (e.g. Kapp Putsch-Freikorps) Invasion of the Ruhr by the French. Hyperinflation caused by printing too much money. Munich Putsch. Blamed for losing WWI. Blamed for signing the harsh treaty of Versailles (nicknamed the ‘November criminals’).

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