1. Finish up Activity 1.12 2. Integrating Quotes - Notes 3. SAT Quiz 4. Writing Prompt #4 OBJECTIVE: Identify and explain elements of argument. Integrate.

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1. Finish up Activity Integrating Quotes - Notes 3. SAT Quiz 4. Writing Prompt #4 OBJECTIVE: Identify and explain elements of argument. Integrate quotes as evidence in writing prompt.

Springboard section of your binder

CLAIM: LOGOSPATHOSETHOS In the SpringBoard section of your binder, take notes over Activity Provide at least TWO examples of each of the appeals.

+0, +1, +2 at the top refers to extra credit awarded if you had your rough draft completed for Lesson 15. Comment about my notations

Integrating Quotes

dodon’t INTRODUCE THE QUOTE START A SENTENCE OR A PARAGRAPH WITH A QUOTE USE AN ENTIRE SENTENCE FROM THE ORIGINAL SOURCE BLEND THE QUOTE INTO YOUR OWN SENTENCE EXPLAIN THE QUOTE STACK QUOTES

 First, you have to introduce the quote. This is your top piece of bread.  Second, use the quote. This is the “good stuff” in the middle of your sandwich.  Third, analyze the quote. This is your bottom piece of bread.

Step 1: Introduce the author and book Dr. Torres explains in his article “Bad Dude Syndrome” that ______________. Writing in the journal Ethics & Society, Dr. Torres argues that _____ In his book _______, X explores ____________. Adapted from: Graff, Gerald And Cathy Birkenstein. They Say, I Say. New York: Norton and Company Print. Never assume that your audience already knows the work that you referring to even if the audience is your professor. Instead, imagine your audience is who may come across your work.

Step 2: Provide a few sentences of background/context leading up to the quote ________ tend to believe that________ Conventional wisdom has it that___________ Society often thinks that ___________ __________ celebrates the fact that ___________ ___________emphasizes that ________________

Step 2: Provide a few sentences of background/context leading up to the quote In his book The Compadre, Dr. Torres explores the complexities of relationships. He emphasizes that friendships can be very difficult to keep up. Although intentions may be sincere, life can get in the way. One of the challenges can be communication.

Step Three: Chose a meaningful quote and introduce it by using a signal phrase According to Dr. Torres, “____________________” (50). Dr. Torres states, “__________________________” (35). Dr. Torres complicates matters further when he writes that “__________” (56). The author demonstrates this concept “________” (4). Notice that the page number goes in parentheses followed by punctuation. A signal phrase is group of words that signals that a quote will be introduced Adapted from: Graff, Gerald And Cathy Birkenstein. They Say, I Say. New York: Norton and Company Print.

Step Three: Introduce a quote by using a signal phrase In his book The Compadre, Dr. Torres explores the complexities of relationships. He emphasizes that friendships can be very difficult to keep up. Although intentions may be sincere, life can get in the way. One of the challenges can be communication. The author demonstrates this when the character “Joe, in a fit of rage, screams at his friend Sue” (Torres 4).

Choose different signal phrases to add variety

Step 4: Provide commentary/analysis after the quote In other words, __________________ To put it another way,_________________ ____________ is important because_____________ Although ______________ may seem trivial, it is in fact crucial in terms of today’s concern over____________. Ultimately, what is at stake here is___________________ Adapted from: Graff, Gerald And Cathy Birkenstein. They Say, I Say. New York: Norton and Company Print.

Step 4: Provide commentary/analysis after the quote In his book The Compadre, Dr. Torres emphasizes the complexities of relationships. He suggests that friendships can be very difficult to keep up. Although intentions may be sincere, life can get in the way. One of the challenges can be communication. The author shows this when the character “Joe, in a fit of rage, screams at his friend Sue” (Torres 4). Ultimately what is at stake here is the relationship. When arguments turn into screaming matches, friendships can be damaged. Rather than screaming, friends should calmly explain their problems, which can perhaps preserve a friendship.

 Defend, challenge, or qualify the statement that America still provides access to the American Dream.  Use what you have learned in Wallenchinsky’s article to support your claim.  Use what you have just learned and integrate at least one quote.