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Exercise 7

No.1  (Original) Genetics (has, have) drawn increasing interest in recent years.  (Revised) Genetics has drawn increasing interest in recent years.

No.2  (Original) A statistical Taguchi approach in addition to a backpropagation neural network model (is, are) developed in this study.  (Revised) A statistical Taguchi approach in addition to a backpropagation neural network model is developed in this study.

No.3  (Original) Neither conventional models nor previous literature (address, addresses) the backpropagation delay problem in this structure.  (Revised) Neither conventional models nor previous literature addresses the backpropagation delay problem in this structure.

No.4  (Original) Unknown variables or time significantly (influence, influences) the product quality when the machine parts are in close proximity to each other.  (Revised) Unknown variables or time significantly influences the product quality when the machine parts are in close proximity to each other.

[Note 2.12]  Avoid wordiness by saying near instead of in close proximity to.

No.5  (Original) The number of theoretical investigations on bubble/liquid displacement in a tube (is, are) increasing.  (Revised) The number of theoretical investigations on bubble/liquid displacement in a tube is increasing.

No.6  (Original) The physical phenomena associated with gas penetration within the polymer melt (require, requires) further clarification.  (Revised) The physical phenomena associated with gas penetration within the polymer melt require further clarification.

No.7  (Original) Neither of the conditions (affects, affect) gas penetration within the polymer melt much.  (Revised) Neither of the conditions affects gas penetration within the polymer melt much.

[Note 2.13]  Depending on the sentence’s context, significantly, markedly, and substantially can be used as alternatives to much and greatly when the Chinese meaning is 很多.

No.8  (Original) Members of the scientific community that (studies, study) genetic similarities between rats and humans (is, are) divided on the issue.  (Revised) Members of the scientific community that studies genetic similarities between rats and humans are divided on the issue.

No.9  (Original) Either surface tensions or thickness ratio (plays, play) an important role in determining the interface shape of a bubble nose.  (Revised) Either surface tensions or thickness ratio plays an important role in determining the interface shape of a bubble nose.

[Note 2.14]  Depending on the sentence’s context, critical, crucial, essential, pertinent, relevant, significant and vital can be used as alternatives to important when the Chinese meaning is 重要.

No.10  (Original) Each of the conditions (is, are) far more complicated than reported in the above studies.  (Revised) Each condition is far more complicated than reported in the above studies.

No.11  (Original) Melt temperature accompanied by mold temperature in all cases (impact, impacts) skin melt thickness.  (Revised) Melt temperature accompanied by mold temperature in all cases impacts skin melt thickness.

[Note 2.15]  Avoid wordiness by saying always instead of in all cases.

No.12  (Original) To test the constructed network model and to identify the real optimal parameter setup (is, are) of primary concern in this study.  (Revised) To test the constructed network model and to identify the real optimal parameter setup are of primary concern in this study.