In the writing section of your binders...  Pretend that you are introducing someone who you admire at an awards ceremony. What would you say about this person?  Give a brief introduction. Try to get your audience’s attention, be detail oriented and explain why this person is a good candidate.

Attention Grabbing Introductions  Goals: 1.Acquire knowledge of writing effective essay introductions. 2. Restructure paragraphs to create an effective introduction. 3. Create effective introductions according to correct structure.

Effective Introductions  Two major elements you must ALWAYS keep in mind before accomplishing any writing task are: PurposePurpose AudienceAudience

Purpose  Three tasks that introductory paragraphs must accomplish are: Getting the reader’s attentionGetting the reader’s attention Providing any necessary background informationProviding any necessary background information Specifically explaining your topic and attitude towards itSpecifically explaining your topic and attitude towards it

Resources  Two important resources you will need to accomplish these tasks are: Attention grabber as the first sentenceAttention grabber as the first sentence Thesis statementThesis statement

Structure  The structure of an introductory paragraph includes: An attention grabbing sentenceAn attention grabbing sentence General information about the topicGeneral information about the topic Specific information about the topicSpecific information about the topic Thesis statementThesis statement **Remember the structure as an inverted triangle (least specific to most specific).

Avoiding Errors  NEVER announce your intentions.  Example: “In this essay, I am going to tell you why friendship is important.”  NEVER use a dictionary definition.  Example: “According to Webster’s dictionary, friendship is a noun that means the state of being friendly.”

Avoiding Errors  NEVER appear uncertain about your topic.  Example: “I agree that Facebook is addicting and usage should be limited, but I like it so I would be angry if I had to stop using it so much.”

Attention Grabbers  Methods to grab your reader’s attention include: Stating a fact or statisticStating a fact or statistic (“Most people establish lifelong friendships between the ages of 15 and 25.”) (“Most people establish lifelong friendships between the ages of 15 and 25.”) Anecdotal or compelling storyAnecdotal or compelling story (“Doris and Carolyn met when they were only 17. Now, they are both 75 years old and have been through multiple, joyful births and the heart wrenching deaths of their husbands. With happiness, there is also sadness, yet Doris and Carolyn have cherished their lifelong friendship.”) (“Doris and Carolyn met when they were only 17. Now, they are both 75 years old and have been through multiple, joyful births and the heart wrenching deaths of their husbands. With happiness, there is also sadness, yet Doris and Carolyn have cherished their lifelong friendship.”)

Attention Grabbers  A relevant quotation (“A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.”) (“A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.”)  The writer’s attitude toward the subject (“Friendship is a key element to sustaining a happy, healthy social life.”) (“Friendship is a key element to sustaining a happy, healthy social life.”)

Sample  On the bottom of your notes, there is a correct sample of what your introduction should look like. Think about the following: What method does the writer use to get the reader’s attention?What method does the writer use to get the reader’s attention? Can you tell where the general information becomes specific?Can you tell where the general information becomes specific? Is the thesis specific and direct?Is the thesis specific and direct?

 1. Fill in the attention grabber.  2. Friendship is one of the most useful tools a person can possess.  3. Fill in with general information.  4. Many movies, specifically Toy Story, demonstrate why friendship is necessary to daily life.  5. Fill in with specific information.  6. Buzz and Woody eventually form a bond that will help save Buzz’s life.  7. Thesis: Forming friendships is the most essential aspect in the movie Toy Story because all of the toys are able to help each other conquer obstacles instead of suffer.

Introduction Unscramble Unscramble the sentences to form a correct paragraph using the effective structure. ANSWERS: 1. D 2. B 3. F 4. G 5. A 6. C 7. E

Friendship Introduction  Use the organizer to begin working on your essay’s introduction.

In closing...  List the parts of an effective introduction structure.  Explain some useful techniques to grab the reader’s attention.  List some techniques you should AVOID in an introduction.