Composition Evaluation and Guidance Lecturer: Wang Xue Qingdao No. 9 Middle School

作文题目 实施素质教育以来，我市许多高 中纷纷开设了英语阅读课，请结合 亲身体会，谈一下开展英语阅读课 的好处。

上档（ ） 一．优秀（ 26 — 29 ） 要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达充分，能有效使用连接成 分，具备较强的书面表达能力。语言小错不超过四个， 不能有一处大错。小错 二．良好（ ） 要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达较充分，语言有少量错误， （大错不超过三个。）但基本不影响意思表达。大错 三．一般（ 18 — 21 ） 要点全面，紧扣主题。语言表达基本充分，语言错误影 响部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。

小错误小错误：单词拼写, 冠词, 区分 大小写, 标点符号错误 大错误：搭配错误，词语用错， （介词，名词，动词，形容词 副词，主谓一致，非谓语动词， 句式结构）

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4.So learn English well can help us to communicate with foreigners easily. 5.The more books we read, the more learned we became. 6.As far as I’m concerned, we should have more English reading courses we can. learning we will learn. as possible as we can.

Recently, many high schools in our city set the English reading courses. They aimed to develop students’ interest of reading. As the development of quality education, the skill of English reading is more and more important. Nowadays, it is common to speak English. Many people like it because English reading has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. So a lot of people are in favor of open the English reading courses. In my view, it is good for us that have some English reading. Why do we need to set the English reading courses? The first reason is that English reading can develop our interest of English. In addition, we can learn English better and better through it. In the modern wold, English is one of the most important languages, so learn English well can help us to communicate with foreigners easily. On the whole, running English reading courses is a good way to promote our English! It has so many advantages.

Recently, more and more schools open English reading courses as well as our school. It is universally acknowledged that English is indispensable to us, on no account can we ignore the value of English reading courses. First of all, English reading courses help us know more knowledge without schoolbooks, and we can learn the world completely. Secondly, it will improve our achievement. For example, we can master the writing skills step by step. Furthermor, we can relax ourselves and reduce our stress from study life. No one can deny that the knowledge of schoolbook is important, but the more books we read, the more learned we became. As far as I’m concerned, we should have more English reading courses we can.

Recently, many high schools in our city set the English reading courses. They aimed to develop students’ interest of reading. As the development of quality education, the skill of English reading is more and more important. Nowadays, it is common to speak English. Many people like it because English reading has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. So a lot of people are in favor of open the English reading courses. In my view, it is good for us that have some English reading. Why do we need to set the English reading courses? The first reason is that English reading can develop our interest of English. In addition, we can learn English better and better through it. In the modern wold, English is one of the most important languages, so learn English well can help us to communicate with foreigners easily. On the whole, running English reading courses is a good way to promote our English! It has so many advantages. 一般： 20

Recently, more and more schools open English reading courses as well as our school. It is universally acknowledged that English is indispensable to us, on no account can we ignore the value of English reading courses. First of all, English reading courses help us know more knowledge without schoolbooks, and we can learn the world completely. Secondly, it will improve our achievement. For example, we can master the writing skills step by step. Furthermor, we can relax ourselves and reduce our stress from study life. No one can deny that the knowledge of schoolbook is important, but the more books we read, the more learned we became. As far as I’m concerned, we should have more English reading courses we can. 良好： 24

Game strategies ? Composition strategies Strategy 1: Avoid some mistakes, especially the big mistakes.

In order to put quality education into practice, many senior middle schools have arranged English reading courses in our city. In modern society, English reading courses have been playing an important role. On one hand, it not only enriches ourselves a lot, but also makes us learn more about the world and become more knowledgeable by reading. At the same time, we are free to read what interests us most and thus we can be keen on our English study. On the other hand, we can elarge our vocabulary through reading, which is basic for our English study. What’s more, reading makes us relaxed and reduces our stress. In conclusion, I think it’s wise to arrange English reading courses for the senior middle school students. enlarge Why was the composition given a high mark? 优秀习作 28 分

Strategy 2. Use connectives and advanced vocabulary. 3. Make up fluent and complex sentences to get high marks.

Composition strategies Avoid some mistakes, especially the big mistakes. Use connectives and advanced vocabulary. Make up fluent and complex sentences to get high marks.

Write a composition —— by using Composition Strategies

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Composition strategies Avoid some mistakes, especially the big mistakes. Use connectives and advanced vocabulary. Make up fluent and complex sentences to get high marks.

Assignment Finish this composition and better it by using some connectives, advanced vocabulary and complex sentences.