Rules of Usage and Composition From The Elements of Style by Oliver Strunk and E. B. White.

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Rules of Usage and Composition From The Elements of Style by Oliver Strunk and E. B. White

Forming Possessive of Nouns Examples: –Charles's friend –The students’ poems –the witch's malice –one's rights –somebody else's umbrella –It's a wise dog that scratches its own fleas. –The dog went into its house.

Use of Commas Examples: –He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of its contents. –The best way to see a country, unless you are pressed for time, is to travel on foot. –My brother, you will be pleased to hear, is now in perfect health. –Well, Susan, this is a fine mess you are in.

Use of Commas Examples: –Letters, packages, etc., should go here. –Horace Fulsome, Ph.D., presided. –Rachel Simonds, Attorney –The Reverend Harry Lang, S.J.

Use of Commas Do not use commas with restrictive forms: –Billy the Kid –The novelist Jane Austen –William the Conqueror –The poet Sappho –James Wright Jr. –People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones.

Use of Commas Use a comma before “but”, but not before “and” (except when “and” connects a list): –I have heard the arguments, but I am still unconvinced. –He has had several years' experience and is thoroughly competent.

Use of Semicolons Join independent clauses with a semicolon: –Mary Shelley's works are entertaining; they are full of engaging ideas. –It is nearly half past five; we will not reach town before dark.

Use of Semicolons If the clauses are joined by a conjunction, use a comma instead of a semicolon: –Mary Shelley's works are entertaining, for they are full of engaging ideas. –It is nearly half past five, but we will not reach town before dark.

Use of Semicolons If the second clause is preceded by an adverb, such as however, accordingly, besides, then, therefore, or thus, and not by a conjunction, use a semicolon and a comma: –I had never been in the place before; besides, it was dark as a tomb.

Use of Colons Use a colon after an independent clause to introduce a list, an amplification, or an illustrative quotation. –Incorrect: Your dedicated whittler requires: a knife, a piece of wood, and a back porch. –Correct: Your dedicated whittler requires three props: a knife, a piece of wood, and a back porch.

Use of Colons Incorrect: Understanding is that penetrating quality of knowledge that grows from: theory, practice, conviction, assertion, error, and humiliation. Correct: Understanding is that penetrating quality of knowledge that grows from theory, practice, conviction, assertion, error, and humiliation.

Use of Dashes Use a dash to set off an abrupt break or interruption and to announce a long appositive or summary. His first thought on getting out of bed — if he had any thought at all — was to get back in again. The rear axle began to make a noise — a grinding, chattering, teeth-gritting rasp.

Verbs and Nouns The number of the subject determines the number of the verb. –Incorrect: The bittersweet flavor of youth — its trials, its joys, its adventures, its challenges — are not soon forgotten. –Correct: The bittersweet flavor of youth — its trials, its joys, its adventures, its challenges — is not soon forgotten.

Verbs and Nouns The number of the subject determines the number of the verb. –Incorrect: One of the ablest scientists who has attacked this problem –Correct: One of the ablest scientists who have attacked this problem

Verbs and Nouns The number of the subject determines the number of the verb. –Incorrect: None of us are perfect. –Correct: None of us is perfect.

Verbs and Nouns A plural verb is commonly used when none suggests more than one thing or person. –Incorrect: None is so fallible as those who are sure they're right. –Correct: None are so fallible as those who are sure they're right.

Verbs and Nouns A singular subject remains singular even if other nouns are connected to it by with, as well as, in addition to, except, together with, and no less than. –His speech as well as his manner is objectionable.

Pronouns Examples: –Will Jane or he be hired, do you think? –The culprit, it turned out, was he. –We heavy eaters would rather walk than ride. –Who knocks? –Give this work to whoever looks idle.

Pronouns Examples: –The ranger offered Shirley and him some advice on campsites. –They came to meet the Baldwins and us. –Let's talk it over between us, then, you and me. –Whom should I ask?

Pronouns Incorrect: –Virgil Soames is the candidate whom we think will win. Correct: –Virgil Soames is the candidate who we think will win. [We think he will win.]

Pronouns Incorrect: –Virgil Soames is the candidate who we hope to elect. Correct: –Virgil Soames is the candidate whom we hope to elect. [We hope to elect him.]

Pronouns Incorrect: –Sandy writes better than me. Correct: –Sandy writes better than I. (than I write)

Pronouns Which is correct? –I think Horace admires Jessica more than me. –I think Horace admires Jessica more than I. Which is correct? –Polly loves cake more than me. –Polly loves cake more than I.

Pronouns Consider: – I think Horace admires Jessica more than me. This means: –I think Horace admires Jessica more than Horace admires me.

Pronouns Consider: – I think Horace admires Jessica more than I. This means: –I think Horace admires Jessica more than I admire Jessica.

Pronouns Consider: – Polly loves cake more than me. This means: –Polly loves cake more than Polly loves me.

Pronouns Consider: – Polly loves cake more than I. This means: –Polly loves cake more than I love cake.

Pronouns Consider: – Do you mind me asking a question? This means: –Do you mind me (as opposed to other members of the group) asking a question?

Pronouns Consider: – Do you mind my asking a question? This means: –Do you mind a question being asked at all?

Who is the Subject? Revise: Walking slowly down the road, he saw a woman accompanied by two children. Better: He saw a woman, accompanied by two children, walking slowly down the road.

Who is the Subject? Revise: On arriving in Chicago, his friends met him at the station. Better: On arriving in Chicago, he was met at the station by his friends.

Who is the Subject? Revise: Being in a dilapidated condition, I was able to buy the house very cheaply. Better: I was able to buy the house very cheaply because it was in a dilapidated condition,

Who is the Subject? Revise: Wondering irresolutely what to do next, the clock struck twelve. Better: The clock struck twelve while he wondered irresolutely what to do next.

Use the Active Voice Revise: My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me. Better: I shall always remember my first visit to Boston.

Use the Active Voice Revise: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground. Better: Dead leaves covered the ground.

Use the Active Voice Revise: It was not long before she was very sorry that she had said what she had. Better: She soon repented her words.

Use the Positive Form Revise: She did not think that studying Latin was a sensible way to use one's time. Better: She thought studying Latin was a waste of time.

Use the Positive Form Replace:With: not honest dishonest not important trifling did not remember forgot did not pay any attention to ignored did not have much confidence in distrusted

Use the Positive Form Don’t weaken your sentences by using words like “would”, “should”, “could”, “may”, “might”, “can” Save these words for situations that are truly uncertain

Use the Positive Form Revise: If you would let us know the time of your arrival, we would be happy to arrange your transportation from the airport. Better: If you will let us know the time of your arrival, we shall be happy to arrange your transportation from the airport.

Be Concrete, Not Vague Revise: A period of unfavorable weather set in. Better: It rained every day for a week. Revise: He showed satisfaction as he took possession of his well-earned reward. Better: He grinned as he pocketed the coin.

Be Concrete, Not Vague Revise: In proportion as the manners, customs, and amusements of a nation are cruel and barbarous, the regulations of its penal code will be severe. Better: In proportion as men delight in battles, bullfights, and combats of gladiators, will they be punished by hanging, burning, and the rack.

Omit Needless Words Replace:With: the question as to whether whether there is no doubt but that no doubt used for fuel purposes used for fuel he is a man whohe in a hasty manner hastily this is a subject that this subject Her story is a strange one. Her story is strange. the reason why is that because

Omit Needless Words Replace:With: owing to the fact that since (or because) in spite of the fact that though (or although) call your attention to the fact that remind you (or notify you) I was unaware of the fact that I was unaware that (or I did not know) the fact that he had not succeeded his failure the fact that I had arrived my arrival

Use Parallel Construction Revise: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed. Better: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.

Use Parallel Construction Revise: His speech was marked by disagreement and scorn for his opponent's position. Better: His speech was marked by disagreement with and scorn for his opponent's position.

Use Parallel Construction Revise: It was both a long ceremony and very tedious. Better: The ceremony was both long and tedious.

Use Parallel Construction Revise: My objections are, first, the injustice of the measure; second, that it is unconstitutional. Better: My objections are, first, that the measure is unjust; second, that it is unconstitutional.

Keep Related Words Together Revise: He noticed a large stain in the rug that was right in the center. Better: He noticed a large stain in the center of the rug.

Keep Related Words Together Revise: You can call your mother in London and tell her all about George's taking you out to dinner for just two dollars. Better: For just two dollars you can call your mother in London and tell her all about George's taking you out to dinner.

Keep Related Words Together Revise: New York's first commercial human-sperm bank opened Friday with semen samples from eighteen men frozen in a stainless steel tank. Better: New York's first commercial human-sperm bank opened Friday when semen samples were taken from eighteen men. The samples were then frozen and stored in a stainless steel tank.

Keep Related Words Together Revise: A dog, if you fail to discipline him, becomes a household pest. Better: Unless disciplined, a dog becomes a household pest.

Place Emphatic Words at the End Revise: Humanity has hardly advanced in fortitude since that time, though it has advanced in many other ways. Better: Since that time, humanity has advanced in many ways, but it has hardly advanced in fortitude.

Place Emphatic Words at the End Revise: This steel is principally used for making razors, because of its hardness. Better: Because of its hardness, this steel is used principally for making razors.