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① Write about the topic directly 开门见山，揭示主题 Honesty is one of the best virtues ． An honest man is always trusted and respected ． On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a liar ， and is looked upon by honest people ． I. A good beginning ② Use proverbs 名人名言： As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy.” It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. As everyone knows ，... No one can deny that... ， It is universally ackowledged that... Honesty

II 、 Rich sentence structures

My name is Li Hua. I’m 18 years old. I am a middle school student from a local middle school. My English is good, and I’m sure I can be a translator. I also like sports and outdoor activities. I am strong and healthy. I had won the champion on the running race. What’s more, I’m good at communicating and I’m ready to help others. I very want to get the job. I’ll appreciate it if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply. I I I I I I I I I I II

① I’m Li Hua, an 18- year-old student from a local middle school. ① My name is Li Hua. I’m 18 years old. I am a middle school student from a local middle school. ② Having learned English for years, I have a good command of spoken and written English, which is of great importance to be a translator. Paraphrase （改述法） Combine the sentences( 合并法 ) Use advanced structures （高级词汇、句型） ② My English is good, and I’m sure I can be a translator. Change the beginning （改变开头）

③ As an active person, I do like sports and outdoor activities so that I’m strong and healthy. ③ I like sports and outdoor activities. I am strong and healthy. I had won the champion on the running race. Change the beginning （改变开头） Use advanced structure （高级表达）

④ What’s more, I’m good at communicating and ④ Furthermore, I’m so easy-going that everyone likes to make friends with me. Change the beginning （改变开 头） Use advanced structure （高级句型） ⑤ Helping others is always my favorite. ⑤ I’m ready to help others.

⑥ I very want to get the job. I’ll appreciate it if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. ⑥ I will spare no effort to do the job well if offered the chance. Paraphrase （改述法） Use advanced structure （高级句型）

My name is Li Hua. I’m 18 years old. I am a middle school student from a local middle school. My English is good, and I’m sure I can be a translator. I also like sports and outdoor activities. I am strong and healthy. I had won the champion on the running race. What’s more, I’m good at communicating and I’m ready to help others. I very want to get the job. I’ll appreciate it if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old student from a local middle school. Having learned English for years, I have a good command of spoken and written English, which is of great importance to be a translator. As an active person, I do like sports and outdoor activities so that I’m strong and healthy. Furthermore, I’m so easy- going that everyone likes to make friends with me. Helping others is always my favorite. I will spare no effort to do the job well if offered the chance. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Combine the sentences ( 合并法 ) Change the beginning ( 改变句子开头 ) Paraphrase ( 改述法 ) Use advanced structures ( 高级词汇句型 )

III 、 Proper transition( 恰当的过渡 )

并列 选择 原因 结果 时间 比较 转折 递进 举例 总结 and; as well as ; in addition to… or; either…or; … because ; owing to; due to ;on account of … so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result… when ; after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally; afterwards… on the contrary ; on the other hand … yet; however ; nevertheless… besides ; further more; what’s more ; in addition… for example/instance; such as ; … in short ; in general ; generally speaking; all in all; in a word… 1. Transitional words: ( 用常用连接词过渡 )

… There is no doubt that reading is an effective way to gain knowledge and enrich our life. In addition,while reading,we can enjoy ourselves with the beautiful language and wonderful stories. Here are my ideas on how to promote reading First of all, regularly recommending excellent books to members is a good idea. Furthermore, by sharing book reviews, we can enjoy a deeper understanding of the books and life. Believe it or not, the comfortable environment in our book bar has successfully helped inviting more students to join us. Isn’t it amazing? … 2. Sentences and phrases: （用常见句型、短语过渡） There is no doubt that Here are my ideas Believe it or not, In addition First of all Furthermore

①.Repeat the topic ( 首尾呼应 ) Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. … Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning. after-class activities IV. A good ending after-class activities

② Draw a conclusion ( 得出结论 ) In conclusion, a good teacher- student relationship can be mutually beneficial. The students gain knowledge eargerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job. In conclusion

③ Use proverbs 名人名言 If you have anything to do, try to do it by yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success. Remember the famous saying: “God helps those who help themselves.” Remember the famous those who help themselves.” saying: “God helps

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Directions: write an English composition according to the instructions given below. 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下 要求完成一篇短文： 1. 简要描述下图内容，并点明主题； 2. 联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示 注意： 1. 词数不少于 120 个； 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 Your Homework Today