W RITING FOR SUCCESS Concise and precise personal narratives.

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W RITING FOR SUCCESS Concise and precise personal narratives.

STAAR P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE P ROMPT G RADE 7 Look at the picture below. Sometimes it’s hard to make a decision because there are so many choices. Write a personal narrative about a time when you had to make a decision. Be sure to write in detail about the choice you made and describe what happened as a result of your decision. 2 Step 1: Look at the picture. What is it saying? Step 2: Read this statement. True or false? What does it make you think of? Step 3: Read the prompt. Highlight it.

W HAT DO I HAVE TO INCLUDE IN MY PAPER ? 1. an introduction Hook the reader Restate the prompt 2. A body Describe the event and what happened. Who What Where Why How 3. A conclusion Tell why you will always remember this event tell what you learned from it restate the prompt

STAAR P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE P ROMPT G RADE 7 Look at the picture below. Sometimes it’s hard to make a decision because there are so many choices. Write a personal narrative about a time when you had to make a decision. Be sure to write in detail about the choice you made and describe what happened as a result of your decision. 4 Step 1: Look at the picture. What is it saying? Step 2: Read this statement. True or false? What does it make you think of? Step 3: Read the prompt. Highlight it.

SAMPLE PAPER

G RADE 7 P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE Score Point 3 Everyone has always faced a decesion, your lying if you haven’t. Wether it be when you’re a baby and don’t know which candy to take, or your an adult and don’t know what job to take. Decesions are everywhere! I’ve made a decision before. It was at the local high school game where I met up with my friend Gabriela. We had been talking latley, and I started to noticed we flirted a lot. So, at the game I didn’t know if I should ask her to be my girlfriend. We went to two different schools and we hardley ever saw each other. I liked her a lot though and I didn’t know what to do. I finnaly just sucked up my act of being afraid and asked her to be my girlfriend. With a huge smile, and a blushed face she responded with “Yes!” 6

G RADE 7 P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE That was the day of September twenty-fourth, We are now in the month of April 2011, and we are still hapily together. Yes, we have hit our ups and downs, but we always find a way to get through all of it. Gabriela sure is the reason I smile everyday. Decisions are hard, they mostly have to be. You could be making a choice that will effect the out come of your life, however, when you do come across a decesion, you have to go with your gut to make the right choice, that’s what I did. (This composition was handwritten on 24 lines.) 7

G RADE 7 P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE Score Point 4 Overwhelming stress, headaches, confusion, and darkness. These are just a few of the memories of the time I made the most difficult decision in my life. It was five o’clock on a school morning when my mom told me I would have to do my hair, get dressed, and get to the bus stop once she left to go visit my sister in the hospital. The only problem with that, was the fact that did not know how to do my own hair. As soon as I got dressed, I called my mom on her cell phone. I tried telling her that I could not do my hair so I could not go to school. In her response, she told me that if I did not go to school, I would suffer consequences. I was in a pickle. I did not know whether to stay home or go to school. Since I 8

G RADE 7 P ERSONAL N ARRATIVE tried to do my hair and I became late for the bus, I decided not to go to school. Later that day when my mom made it home, she told me I was in deep trouble. When I sat down to tell her about my situation, she sounded like she was frusturated with me, but I was wrong. It turned out that my mom gave me mercy. She told me that all I had to do was to apologize, so I did from the bottom of my heart. Ever since that morning, I have always seen the mercy in the eyes of my parents. I learned that if I ever had to make a decision like that again, to go through with the hardest decision for me. In this case, it was doing my hair and going to school. The fact is that the most difficult decision turned out to be the decision I should have made. (This composition was handwritten on 24 lines.) 9