Clarity Through Format Sections and Subsections One of the easiest ways of formatting a contract is to use sections and subsections. EXAMPLE OUTLINE: 2.1.

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Clarity Through Format Sections and Subsections One of the easiest ways of formatting a contract is to use sections and subsections. EXAMPLE OUTLINE: 2.1 The appointment of Board Members Educational Requirements for Appointment Experience Requirements for Appointment Voting for the Board Members. » Recording the Vote » Proxy Voting » Abstention

Clarity Through Format TABULATION With tabulation, a long sentence is broken down into 2 subsections, each of which is grammatically independent of the other, although conceptually related. Subsections can also be used to join two or more related sentences. This reduces the length of the contract and aids the reader by showing how the sentences are related. EXAMPLE: Non-competition. For a one-year period after the Term, the Executive (a) shall not employ any person who was an employee during the Term; and (b) shall not interfere with the relationship between the Company and any of its employees.

Clarity Through Format When to use tabulation: A judgment call Remember: To join 2 or more sentences through tabulation, the subject matter of the sentences should be related. If the subject matter is not related, create separate sections and insert them in the appropriate place in the contract. When deciding if you should break down 1 sentence into a tabulated format, any sentence with a compound or a series is a candidate.  Compound- 2 items in a sentence joined by and or or.  Series- 3 or more items in a sentence in a sentence joined by and or or. The ultimate deciding factor is whether tabulation makes it easier for a reader to assimilate the information. Everything does not need to be tabulated. EX: Heather likes to swim, read, dance, and go to the movies.

Clarity Through Format Tabulation Guideline #1  Use parallel drafting to construct the tabulated sentence. To test whether the tabulation makes sense, read the introductory language (in red) with each of the subsections to see if they make sense. EXAMPLE 1: Each time an employee is late to work, his supervisor shall (a) issue a verbal warning, (b) place a notation in the employee’s file, and (c) inform the managing partner that the employee was late. EXAMPLE 2: Each time an employee is late to work, his supervisor shall (a) issue a verbal warning, (b) may place a notation in the employee’s file, and (c) inform the managing partner that the employee was late.

Clarity Through Format Tabulation Guideline #2  The grammar of the sentence determines its punctuation. Sentence Format- Each tabulated subsection creates a full sentence when joined with the introductory language. EXAMPLE: Each time an employee is late to work, (a) his supervisor shall issue a verbal warning. (b) his supervisor shall place a notation in the employee’s file. (c) his supervisor shall inform the managing partner that the employee was late. List Format- The introductory language is a complete sentence and each tabulated subsection is part of an enumerated list. NOTE: Often, the introductory language includes some form of the word follow. EXAMPLE: Each time an employee is late to work, his supervisor shall do the following: (a) His supervisor shall issue a verbal warning. (b) His supervisor shall place a notation in the employee’s file. (c) His supervisor shall inform the managing partner that the employee was late.

Clarity Through Format Guidelines for Sentence Format Tabulation 1.In the introductory language, include all the words common to each tabulated subsection. There are 4 exceptions to this rule: 1. do not separate an article (the, a, an) from the noun it precedes. 2. (stylistic, not all drafters do this) if the tabulated subsections are a series of negative covenants introduced with shall not, put shall not with each subsection, rather than the introductory language. 3. (stylistic, not all drafters do this) sometimes a provision is easier to read if the to of an infinitive is kept together with the present form of its verb (e.g., to see, to walk, to draft) 4. If putting all the common words in the introductory language affects a subsection’s substantive meaning, then repeat the words in each subsection.

Clarity Through Format Guidelines for Sentence Format Tabulation 2.Punctuate the introductory language as you would if the sentence were untabulated. 3.Begin each tabulated subsection with a lowercase letter. 4.If no concluding language is common to each subsection, do the following: (a) End each tabulated subsection (other than the last) with a semicolon. (b) Insert and or or as appropriate after the semicolon of the next to last subsection. (c) End the last tabulated subsection with a period.

Clarity Through Format Guidelines for Sentence Format Tabulation 5.If concluding language is common to each subsection, do the following: (a) End each tabulated subsection with whatever punctuation would be used (if any) if the sentence were untabulated. (b) Insert and or or as appropriate after the punctuation of the next to last subsection. (c) Begin the concluding language at the left margin so that it has the same margin as the introductory language. (d)End the concluding paragraph with a period.

Clarity Through Format Guidelines for Sentence Format Tabulation 1.Draft the introductory language so that it includes the phrase as follows or the following or otherwise incorporates that concept and end it with a colon (:). 2.Draft the introductory language if appropriate, so that it signals whether the items in each subsection are cumulative or alternative. 3.Begin each subsection with a capital letter and end it with a period. 4.Do not insert and or or after the next to last subsection.

Clarity Through Format Multilevel and Double Tabulation This occurs in a sentence that has two or more independent sets of subsections at the same level. EXAMPLE: Each time an employee is late to work, his supervisor shall (a) issue a verbal warning, (b) place a notation in the employee’s file, and (c) inform the managing partner that the employee was late, except for those instances where: (i) the employee calls to say that he will be late, (ii) the employee has a medical emergency, (iii) the employee has a familial emergency, or (iv) the employee is taking one-half day of leave time.

Clarity Through Format Numbering Systems Contracts can be organized into main ideas and subsidiary ideas just like briefs and memorandums (See Class 9, Slide 1). Headings Headings that accurately relate a provision’s substance facilitate a reader’s review. When choosing a heading, make sure that it accurately describes the provision’s contents. Table of Contents If the contract is long, a table of contents is helpful as it helps a reader to find a specific section or provision quickly. NOTE: Most sophisticated word-processing applications can automatically create a table of contents if you use its numbering system.

Clarity Through Sentence Structure Any sentence longer than 3 lines is a good candidate for tabulation, or for being broken down into 2 or more sentences. Every sentence has core words: the subject, verb, and object. Keep these words together. EX: Bart (subject) ate (verb) a (article) Butterfinger (object). The core words should be as close to the beginning of a sentence as possible. EX: Bart ate a Butterfinger every day for the past month, and has not yet had a stomach ache from eating so much chocolate.