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Formulaic Writing GHSWT

Characteristics of A Formulaic Paper Formulaic Writing Characteristics of A Formulaic Paper The writer announces his or her thesis and three supporting ideas in the opening paragraph. The writer restates one supporting idea to begin each of the three body paragraphs. The writer repeats or restates his/her controlling idea and supporting points in the final paragraph. Entire sentences may be repeated verbatim from the introduction, used as topic sentences in each of the body paragraphs, and repeated in the conclusion. Formulaic papers announce supporting ideas in the introduction and beginning of each body paragraph: Formulaic papers cannot receive a score higher than “2” in the Organization domain. Donald Murray: “The general reader today does not have the patience to read the same thing three times.”

Formulaic Writing Formulaic writing does not demonstrate an understanding of the principles of effective organization. Formulaic writing does not demonstrate a purposeful grouping or sequencing of ideas. Formulaic writing does not demonstrate an understanding of transitions. Formulaic writing will adversely affect a writer’s scores in Ideas, Organization, Style, and Conventions because the repetition limits the variety demonstrated in each scoring domain.

We shouldn’t have to wear uniforms. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive.

Sample of Formulaic Writing I believe students at our school should not have to wear uniforms. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. If everybody had to wear the same thing everyday, it would be boring to look at. It would be better if we got to pick out own clothes. So making us wear uniforms to school we just be too boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. It is really hard to play sports in school uniforms, because sometimes we have to play hard to win. We can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive. You would have to buy more than one uniform, so you would have something to wear every day. Having to buy all those uniforms would be too expensive. In conclusion, those are my reasons why we should not wear school uniforms. They are really boring for the students, we can’t play sports in uniforms, and they are too expensive for us. In this formulaic paper, the writer’s position (student’s should not have to wear uniforms) and three supporting ideas (uniforms are boring, can’t play sports in uniforms, uniforms are expensive) are announced in the introduction. The first sentence of each body paragraph repeats one of the supporting ideas The last sentence in each body paragraph restates the supporting idea again. In the conclusion, the writer restates his/her position and the three supporting ideas. There is very little development of the supporting ideas within the body paragraphs; the majority of the paper consists of the repetition of the supporting ideas. The writer also uses repetitive transitions to begin a new paragraph (“The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms”). This paper is an extreme example of formulaic writing with extensive repetition and formulaic transition words. There are varying degrees of formulaic papers that may demonstrate some or all of the following characteristics: announcing the position and supporting ideas in the introduction, repeating the supporting ideas to begin and end body paragraphs, repeating the position and supporting ideas in the conclusion, repetitive transition words.

Sample of Formulaic Writing I believe students at our school should not have to wear uniforms. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. If everybody had to wear the same thing everyday, it would be boring to look at. It would be better if we got to pick out own clothes. So making us wear uniforms to school we just be too boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. It is really hard to play sports in school uniforms, because sometimes we have to play hard to win. We can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive. You would have to buy more than one uniform, so you would have something to wear every day. Having to buy all those uniforms would be too expensive. In conclusion, those are my reasons why we should not wear school uniforms. They are really boring for the students, we can’t play sports in uniforms, and they are too expensive for us. In this formulaic paper, the writer’s position (student’s should not have to wear uniforms) and three supporting ideas (uniforms are boring, can’t play sports in uniforms, uniforms are expensive) are announced in the introduction. The first sentence of each body paragraph repeats one of the supporting ideas The last sentence in each body paragraph restates the supporting idea again. In the conclusion, the writer restates his/her position and the three supporting ideas. There is very little development of the supporting ideas within the body paragraphs; the majority of the paper consists of the repetition of the supporting ideas. The writer also uses repetitive transitions to begin a new paragraph (“The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms”). This paper is an extreme example of formulaic writing with extensive repetition and formulaic transition words. There are varying degrees of formulaic papers that may demonstrate some or all of the following characteristics: announcing the position and supporting ideas in the introduction, repeating the supporting ideas to begin and end body paragraphs, repeating the position and supporting ideas in the conclusion, repetitive transition words.

Sample of Formulaic Writing I believe students at our school should not have to wear uniforms. The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because they are boring. The second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because you can’t play sports in uniforms. My third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms is because uniforms are expensive. If everybody had to wear the same thing everyday, it would be boring to look at. It would be better if we got to pick out own clothes. It is really hard to play sports in school uniforms, because sometimes we have to play hard to win. You would have to buy more than one uniform, so you would have something to wear every day. In conclusion, those are my reasons why we should not wear school uniforms. In this formulaic paper, the writer’s position (student’s should not have to wear uniforms) and three supporting ideas (uniforms are boring, can’t play sports in uniforms, uniforms are expensive) are announced in the introduction. The first sentence of each body paragraph repeats one of the supporting ideas The last sentence in each body paragraph restates the supporting idea again. In the conclusion, the writer restates his/her position and the three supporting ideas. There is very little development of the supporting ideas within the body paragraphs; the majority of the paper consists of the repetition of the supporting ideas. The writer also uses repetitive transitions to begin a new paragraph (“The first reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the second reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms, the third and final reason why we shouldn’t wear uniforms”). This paper is an extreme example of formulaic writing with extensive repetition and formulaic transition words. There are varying degrees of formulaic papers that may demonstrate some or all of the following characteristics: announcing the position and supporting ideas in the introduction, repeating the supporting ideas to begin and end body paragraphs, repeating the position and supporting ideas in the conclusion, repetitive transition words.