Mr. Verlin South Philadelphia High School October 15, 2014.

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Mr. Verlin South Philadelphia High School October 15, 2014

Preliminaries  Re-write the following sentences placing commas where needed:  I went to the store and bought eggs milk juice and cookies.  While walking home from school I stopped at the store.

Objectives:  The students will be able to write a variety of sentences to express the same idea.  Sentence expresses a complete thought.  Place commas and particularly periods in the right places (no run- ons).  Sentences contain properly placed pronouns (I, he, she, etc.)

Focus Lesson: Writing…  Complete Thoughts: Writing Workshop (p. 8)  Run-ons: Writing Workshop (pp. 10 and 11)  Pronouns: Writing Workshop (pp. 13 and 14)  Sentence Length: Writing Workshop (pp. 17 and 18)