Putting Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers In Their Place

Misplaced Modifiers A modifier is a word, phrase, or clause that describes another word, phrase, or clause in some way. A misplaced modifier means that there is a separation between the modifier and what it describes. The solution is to place the modifier as close as possible to the word or words it describes.

Misplaced Modifiers Misplaced modifier: Sam bought a used car from a local dealer with a smoky tailpipe. Corrected version: Sam bought a used car with a smoky tailpipe from a local dealer.

Misplaced Modifiers Misplaced modifier: The robin built a nest at the back of our house of grass and string. Corrected version: The robin built a nest of grass and string at the back of our house.

Misplaced Modifiers Misplaced modifier: Zach almost sneezed fifteen times last evening. Corrected version: Zach sneezed almost fifteen times last evening.

Dangling Modifiers A dangling modifier is when the modified word or words are missing. The solution is to add words to correct the sentence and add clarity.

Dangling Modifiers Dangling modifier: Sitting in the dentist’s chair, the sound of the drill started. Corrected version: Sitting in the dentist’s chair, Alonzo heard the drill start up.

Dangling Modifiers Dangling modifier: Skating on the pond, the ice was very slick. Corrected version: While Katie was skating on the pond, the ice was very slick.

Practice: Underline the modifier, identify whether misplaced or dangling, and correct the sentence. 1.We gave the old clothes to a local charity that had been piled up in the basement. 2.The terrified patient spoke to the doctor with a terminal disease. 3.The student pleaded with the instructor who cheated on the test. 4.Walking to the movies, the stormcloud opened. 5.When nine years old, my father enrolled in medical school.

Practice In the green Elements of Language book: –Complete Exercise 8, p. 545