Literacy Test Preparation Grade 10 History Booklet 2, Section VII: Reading Pages 18, 19, 20 Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5

Booklet 2, Section VII: Reading Pages 18, 19, 20

Multiple choice answer key for questions 1-5:

Booklet 2, Section VII: Reading Pages 18, 19, 20 Question 6 – Explain how Burd’s project demonstrates the work of a scientist. Use details from the selection and your own ideas to support your answer. This question is awarded a mark of 0, 10, 20 or 30. If the answer space is blank, your writing is illegible or the response is incorrect, the answer will receive a mark of 0.

Booklet 2, Section VII: Reading Pages 18, 19, 20 Question 6 Explain how Burd’s project demonstrates the work of a scientist. Use details from the selection and your own ideas to support your answer. Here’s how marks of 10, 20 and 30 are awarded. 10response indicates minimal reading comprehension response provides minimal or irrelevant ideas and information from the reading selection 20 response indicates some reading comprehension response provides vague ideas and information from the reading selection; it may include irrelevant ideas and information from the reading selection 30 response indicates considerable reading comprehension response provides accurate, specific and relevant ideas and information from the reading selection

Booklet 2, Section VII: Reading Pages 18, 19, 20 Question 6 Explain how Burd’s project demonstrates the work of a scientist. Use details from the selection and your own ideas to support your answer. Here’s what an answer given a score of 10 looks like:

Booklet 2, Section X: Reading Pages 24, 25, 26 Notice how, even though this student filled all of the lines…

Booklet 2, Section X: Reading Pages 24, 25, 26 …they received a score of 10 out of 30 because there are no details from the selection to support the response.

Booklet 2, Section X: Reading Pages 24, 25, 26 Question 6 Explain how Burd’s project demonstrates the work of a scientist. Use details from the selection and your own ideas to support your answer. Here’s what an answer given a score of 30 looks like:

Booklet 2, Section X: Reading Pages 24, 25, 26 This student not only clearly gives an example of how the project demonstrates the work of a scientist…

Booklet 2, Section X: Reading Pages 24, 25, 26 This student not only clearly gives an example of how the project demonstrates the work of a scientist, but they also explain the example with clear evidence.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5

This question is awarded a mark of 0, 10, 20, 30, 40, 50 or 60 for Topic Development. If the answer space is blank, your writing is illegible or the response is incorrect, the answer will receive a mark of 0.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s how marks of 10, 20, 30, 40, 50 and 60 are awarded. 10 The response is related to the prompt but does not express an opinion. OR The response expresses an opinion with no supporting details or provides details unrelated to the opinion. There is no evidence of organization. 20 The response is related to the prompt, but only part of the response expresses and supports an opinion. OR The response is related to the prompt, and expresses and supports an opinion, but the opinion is unclear or inconsistent. There are insufficient supporting details: too few or repetitious. There is limited evidence of organization. 30 The response is related to the prompt and expresses a clear opinion. There are insufficient and/or vague supporting details or the connection of the details to the opinion is not always clear. There is evidence of organization, but lapses distract from the overall communication. 40 The response is related to the prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient supporting details, however only some are specific. The organization is mechanical and any lapses do not distract from the overall communication. 50 The response is related to the prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient specific supporting details. The organization is logical. 60 The response is related to the assigned prompt. A clear and consistent opinion is developed with sufficient specific supporting details that are thoughtfully chosen. The organization is coherent demonstrating a thoughtful progression of ideas.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what an answer given a score of 10 looks like:

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Notice how this answer makes use of three of the provided lines and does not provide any supporting details.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what an answer given a score of 60 looks like:

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what an answer given a score of 60 looks like: Notice how this student took the time to write a long, detailed response, filling both of the sheets of paper supplied. Move forward in this presentation to read this student’s response in detail.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Student Response page 1

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Annotation: A clear and consistent opinion is developed (Courses should be compulsory in highschool) with sufficient specific supporting details that are thoughtfully chosen (…it provides basic knowledge, diverse educational pathways, and a back-up plan if a student changes his or her mind). Each reason is well developed with specific details (…even if some students want to be construction workers, they would have a better opportunity in that career because they can connect what they are building to what they learnt in history class about ancient structures).The organization is coherent and demonstrates a thoughtful progression of ideas. The argument unfolds in a logical order (basic foundation, pathways, back-up plan) as presented in the introduction. Here’s what the evaluators said about this answer,which was given a score of 60 for Topic Development:

This question is also awarded a mark of 0, 10, 20, 30 or 40 for Writing Conventions.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s how the marks of 10, 20, 30 and 40 for Writing Convention were awarded. 10There is insufficient evidence to assess the use of conventions. OR Errors in conventions interfere with communication. 20Errors in conventions distract from communication. 30Errors in conventions do not distract from communication. 40Control of conventions is evident in written work.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what an answer given a score of 10 for Writing Conventions looks like: Annotation: The response provides insufficient evidence to assess conventions.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Notice that this answer is so short that there is not enough evidence to evaluate writing conventions: Annotation: The response provides insufficient evidence to assess conventions.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what an answer given a score of 40 for Writing Conventions looks like: Move forward in this presentation to read this student’s response in detail.

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 A score of 40 for Writing Convention : Page 1

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 A score of 40 for Writing Convention : Page 2

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 A score of 40 for Writing Convention : Page 3

Booklet 1: Section I: Writing Pages 3, 4, 5 Here’s what the evaluators said about this answer, which was given a score of 40 for Writing Conventions: Annotation: Consistent and correct use of conventions is demonstrated in the use of punctuation, spelling (technically, throughout, wasting), and sentence structure (Meanwhile, they’re taking compulsory courses that won’t benefit them…However, there are some students who need math or english or science for the career they wish to have) throughout the series of paragraphs. Errors in capitalization (English), sentence structure (Those students could pick the courses themselves, they don’t have to be forced to take them; … take them, they know…) do exist, but they do not undermine the overall control conventions.

Good luck on the OSSLT!