E-Writing Course Topic 76 Teacher Fly February,2012

Slide 2 - Copyright © E-brain - All Rights Reserved Topic 76 Problems Teenagers Face Topic （话题） : Problems Teenagers Face Prompt( 提示） : What are some problems that teenagers face in life? Choose one and write an essay on how to solve this problem. Include supporting details and examples in the essay. Essay type （文章类型） : Expository （说明文） Word limit （字数限制） : 200~ 250words

Slide 3 - Copyright © E-brain - All Rights Reserved Vocabulary physical ['fizikəl] 身体的 psychological [,saikə'l ɔ d ʒ ikəl] 心理的 peer pressure 同辈的压力 skip class 逃课 stay away from 远离 counselor ['kaunsələ] 指导老师 juvenile deliquency 青少年犯罪 ['d ʒ u:vinail] [di'liŋkwənsi] puppy love 早恋

Slide 4 - Copyright © E-brain - All Rights Reserved Model essay Peer Pressure Teenagers go through a lot during their teenage years because they experience physical and psychological changes at this time. One major problem teenagers face is peer pressure. Peer pressure refers to a social pressure by a certain group on an individual. Peer pressure may create many problems amongst teenagers, such as bullying, smoking, drinking, fighting, skipping classes, and so on. One way to handle peer pressure is by talking openly to the teenager who is facing this problem at school. A troubled teenager should seek help from a teacher or someone older, someone who can understand the situation and give good guidance. Choosing the right friends is another way to overcome peer pressure. Teenagers should stay away from friends who force them to do things that are wrong. They should learn how to say “no” when they are asked to do something they know is wrong. In short, teenagers can overcome peer pressure with the help of adults. A parent, a teacher, or a counselor who is always ready to talk, can help teenagers handle peer pressure better. Moreover, staying away from bad friends also helps most teenagers to avoid the pressure.

Slide 5 - Copyright © E-brain - All Rights Reserved 1.3 发展性 E. 对比法 通过时间对比、事物对比来说明问题。 Unfortunately, doing things badly has gone out of style. It used to be a mark of class if a lady or a gentleman sang a little, painted a little, played the violin a little. You didn't have to be good at it; the point was to be fortunate enough to have the leisure time for such pursuits. But in today's competitive world we have to be "experts" even in our hobbies. （《 21 世纪大学英语》第三册） Ours has become a society of employees. A hundred years or so ago only one out of every five Americans at work was employed, i.e., worked for somebody else. Today only one out of five is not employed but working for himself. And where fifty years ago, "being employed" means working as a factory laborer or as a farmhand, the employee of today is increasingly a middle-class person with a substantial formal education, holding a professional or management job requiring intellectual and technical skills. （《研究生英语》） 正文的发展

Slide 6 - Copyright © E-brain - All Rights Reserved Supporting idea questions 1. What are some problems that teenagers face in life? 2. Choose one and tell us how to solve this problem? 3. What's your problem as a teenage?

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