Formal s and/or letters
address You are not able to use your lmusds.org account because you can’t receive s from outside of lmusds. Make sure it’s a “professional” . Not or Not or First and last name. A number should not be associated with anything unprofessional. First and last name. A number should not be associated with anything unprofessional.
Subject Line Use a short and specific subject line College Fair at Nipomo H.S. College Fair at Nipomo H.S. AVID College Fair at Nipomo H.S. AVID College Fair at Nipomo H.S.
Salutation Begin the with: Dear Mr./Ms./Mrs. (last name) or Good Morning Mr./Ms./Mrs.
Body of 1. Introduce yourself. Say who you are? NHS, AVID, 11 th Grade, School Project: College Fair, you are representing this UC NHS, AVID, 11 th Grade, School Project: College Fair, you are representing this UC 2. Why are you writing? “I am writing to ask for your support by providing us with (1) printed literature that our student body may take with them and further their knowledge of your school (2) or free UC__ items that we can give out to our student body and increase our college going culture. “I am writing to ask for your support by providing us with (1) printed literature that our student body may take with them and further their knowledge of your school (2) or free UC__ items that we can give out to our student body and increase our college going culture.
Body of 3. Give them the NHS address. You may send the material directly to our High School at: You may send the material directly to our High School at: Attention: Ms. Alejandra Lopez Nipomo High School 525 N. Thompson Road, Nipomo, CA 93444
Body of 4. Thank them and give them contact information. Thank you for your time and we hope that you can support our AVID (Advancement Via Individual Determination) program by providing the above mentioned. We thank you in advance for supporting us in spreading a college-going culture and allowing us to promote your campus. If you have further questions you may contact us at “write your professional ” or by speaking directly with our AVID teacher at or ext
Closing Sincerely, Your first and last name Nipomo High School AVID 11
Double Check Check Spelling!! Read it aloud Have at least 2 other students proof your writing