Focus on sentence variety, text evidence, and organization of argument.
1. Highlight all of your compound sentences 2. How much is highlighted? 3. If it is 50-75%, you’re good. If not, revise to add in more sentence variety. 4. Check your other sentences. Are they complete? Subject and predicate? Are they run-ons?
1. Check your essay against your outline. Did you include these paragraphs? 1.Introduction, including your claim 2.Reason #1 to support your claim 3.Reason #2 to support your claim 4.Counterclaim and why it is wrong 5.Conclusion 2. Check your Goal-Setting Worksheet. What was your goal? Did you do that? 3. Underline all evidence from the text. There should be 2-3 in each body paragraph.
Read your essay backwords to catch any spelling errors. Circle them and look up the word. Read your essay aloud to a partner, writing down anything you need to fix. Have your partner read your essay and check for: Capitalization Organization (the 5 paragraphs everyone should have) Punctuation (check for complete sentences – no fragments, no run-ons) Spelling (circle anything that might be wrong, they will look it up) Neatly write your name at the bottom of the essay you check.
Rewrite your essay on a new sheet of paper. This copy should be neat, clean, and free of mistakes – it’s been checked twice! You may type it up at home for 10 pts extra credit. You will turn in all parts of the writing process together on Thursday.
Final Draft Goal Sheet Rough Draft Article with outline attached