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What do your classmates think of your writing? Read your assigned review Use the peer review sheet to check your assigned review You have 10 minutes Please write one suggestion to the writer on how they can improve their writing
Diary Entry
W rite in the past tense and in... “Chronological Order” To help the reader empathise with you Use pronouns such as... I, We, Us, We’re a aa and I’m. They help to make the reader feel part of the text.
Firstly…. Following on from … Following on from … Next, I … Next, I … Eventually, I … Eventually, I … Some time later … Some time later … Afterwards, I … Afterwards, I … Finally … Finally …
Detailed Description You need to add lots of detailed information relating to people, places, events & objects. Remember to include your personal thoughts and feelings about these things. By doing so, your writing will be more appealing to the reader.
Familiar - Everyday Events Write about ordinary, daily things that everybody does at some time.. – BUT – Do try to write about them using a completely different angle or slant. For example – Brushing your teeth while sitting on a deserted island beach, watching the Ocean crash loudly against the rocks.
Explain Why.... Help your reader to understand your moods. By explaining your different Emotions a aa and Feelings – –– – the reader will be able to... VISUALIZE a aa and put themselves in your shoes. So, if you are sad – explain why you are sad. Similarly, if you are happy – explain why you are feeling in such a way.
Top Tip 1 – Top Tip 1 – Write in Chronological Order ( Using the past tense ) Top Tip 2 – Top Tip 2 – Detailed Description Top Tip 3 – Top Tip 3 – Familiar – Everyday Events Top Tip 4 – Top Tip 4 – Explain Why
Interview
1) Introduction paragraph – who is being interviewed, his/her title, when they were interviewed, and the topic of the interview. 2) Body sections/ “interview” – written transcript of dialogue between interviewer and interviewee 3) Final paragraph – provide a finishing thought from the interviewer on the interview topic
Essay
Introduction: ◦ 3-5 sentences ◦ Thesis = main idea. LAST SENTENCE Body paragraphs (good idea to have three) ◦ Each body paragraph should start with a topic NOT an example. ◦ Examples (2 or 3) are included WITHIN the body paragraph ◦ Concluding sentence. DO NOT END your paragraph with an example/detail
Conclusion: ◦ 3-5 sentences. 1 or 2 sentences DOES NOT = a conclusion ◦ Restate your main ideas (3 body paragraphs) in one sentence or a couple of sentences ◦ DO NOT ADD ANY DETAILS OR EXAMPLES that were not included in the body of your essay ◦ End your conclusion with a thought-provoking sentence
News Report
First paragraph: ◦ Usually only one sentence long ◦ Tells very BRIEFLY the most important information (Who, What, When, Where, Why) Next several paragraphs: ◦ More than one sentence each. ◦ Explain more details about the event that is being reported on ◦ What’s most important for a reader to know – goes closer to the beginning of the article ◦ What’s less important for the reader to know goes closer to the end
Last paragraph: ◦ Least important/relevant details ◦ Newspapers DO NOT actually end like essays with a proper conclusion (AKA: don’t write “in conclusion”) Note: Newspaper reporters try to be objective, not biased in their writing, so think about whether you are writing something that is objective (i.e. “A crime was committed last night” NOT: “A horrible, nasty crime was committed by a felon last night”)
Debate Speech
I agree/ disagree………… In my opinion……………. I am in favor of………… To be honest……………. That is your opinion. My opinion is that…………. However………… On the other hand……………
Acknowledge the audience in some way Get the audiences’ attention (like by using an interesting fact, statistic, or funny story) State what the topic is of the debate State your position (your central idea or purpose) Briefly identify the main points Make your audience interested in what you have to say Rhetorical questions (questions that you don’t expect an answer for) Address your audience every few paragraphs or so
Answer the prompt/stimulus with the text type that you are MOST familiar/comfortable with Another topic might be more interesting, but it may have a text type that you’ve never written or at least haven’t practiced a lot
True. “possible he was not born in 1889” False. “She died in 1928…Charlie…then a commercial success” False. “First took to the stage…in 1894” False. “as the newspaper boy…in Sherlock Holmes” False. “Chaplin and Laurel shared a room in a boarding house” SKIP
Exercise 37 (page 79-80) Exercise 80 (page ) Exercise 81 (page )