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Tone in Business Writing

What is Tone? "Tone in writing refers to the writer's attitude toward the reader and the subject of the message. The overall tone of a written message affects the reader just as one's tone of voice affects the listener in everyday exchanges" (Ober 88).

What is Tone?What is Tone? How can I make sure my messages have the appropriate tone? ◦ Why am I writing this document? ◦ Who am I writing to and what do I want them to understand? ◦ What kind of tone should I use? ◦ Why am I writing this document?

Purpose Consider the purpose of your writing to determine how you should express the message you wish to convey. Consider your audience and what action you want the reader to take in response to your message.

Intent For example… Suzy is writing a job acceptance letter to an employer but is unsure of the tone she should take in the message. She has decided to accept the position. When she asks herself, "What is my intent upon writing?" she answers, "I want to accept the position, thank the company for the offer, and establish goodwill with my new co-workers." As she writes the letter she quickly assumes a tone that is appreciative for the offer and enthusiastic about beginning a new job.

Who am I writing to and what do I want them to understand? ◦ Who is your audience?  The message you wish to express must be written in a way that will effectively reach the reader. ◦ The tone that you use to write the document directly affects how the reader will interpret what is said.

For example… Bob is writing a cover letter for a position as a Sales Representative for a newspaper. ◦ He is unsure that he will be able to succeed at such a position, and uses phrases such as:  "I hope that you will contact me..."  "I know that my qualifications are not very impressive, but..."

Clearly, Bob is not assuming an appropriate tone. He must consider that: ◦ He is applying for a position as a Sales Representative. ◦ He wants the employer to ask him to come in for an interview. ◦ The employer will look for highly motivated and confident individuals.

If Bob were to consider these things he may rewrite his cover letter to include such phrases as: ◦ "You can reach me at ; I look forward to hearing from you." ◦ "My qualifications make me an excellent applicant for this position..." The tone of the message has changed drastically to sound more confident and self-assured.

What kind of tone should I use? ◦ Be confident. ◦ Be courteous and sincere. ◦ Use appropriate emphasis and subordination. ◦ Use non-discriminatory language. ◦ Stress the benefits for the reader. ◦ Write at an appropriate level of difficulty.

Be Confident You can feel confident if you have carefully prepared and are knowledgeable about the material you wish to express. A confident tone will have a persuasive effect on your audience. ◦ Don’t be overconfident, though. (This can easily be interpreted as arrogant or presumptuous.)

For example… Not: You must agree that I am qualified for the position. But: My qualifications in the areas of accounting and customer service meet your job requirements.

Be Courteous and Sincere Use a tone that is polite and sincere. (Without sincerity, politeness can sound condescending.) Consider the words and phrases you use in your document and how your reader will likely receive them.

For example… Not: You didn't read the instructions carefully, thus your system has shut down. But: The system may automatically shut down if any installation errors occur.

Use Appropriate Emphasis and Subordination To emphasize an idea, place it in a short sentence. ◦ Emphasis: Smoking will no longer be permitted in the building. The committee on employee health and safety reached this decision after considering evidence from researchers and physicians on the dangers of second-hand smoke. To subordinate an idea, place it in a compound sentence. ◦ Subordination: The committee on employee health and safety has finished considering evidence, and they have reached the decision that smoking will no longer be permitted in the building.

Emphasis & Subordination Use active voice to emphasize the person or thing performing an action Active: Scientists have conducted experiments to test the hypothesis. Use passive voice to emphasize the action that is being performed. ◦ Passive: Experiments have been conducted to test the hypothesis.

Emphasis & Subordination Consider the amount of space that you devote to an idea and the language you use to describe your ideas. ◦ Emphasis: Our primary consideration must be cost. ◦ Subordination: A minor point to consider is appearance

Emphasis & Subordination Repeating important ideas is good way to emphasize them as well. ◦ Our primary consideration must be cost - cost to purchase, cost to operate, and cost to maintain.

Emphasis & Subordination Any information that stands out from the rest of the text will be emphasized. ◦ Bolding, ◦ underlining, ◦ CAPITALIZING,  indenting, and ◦ highlighting will convey emphasis to your reader. (Do not use this strategy frequently or the design effect will be lost. )

Use Nondiscriminatory Language Make sure your writing is free of sexist language and free of bias based on such factors as race, ethnicity, religion, age, sexual orientation, and disability. Use neutral job titles ◦ Not: Chairman ◦ But: Chairperson

Use Nondiscriminatory Language Avoid demeaning or stereotypical terms ◦ Not: After the girls in the office receive an order, our office fills it within 24 hours. ◦ But: When orders are received from the office, they are filled within 24 hours.

Use Nondiscriminatory Language Avoid words and phrases that unnecessarily imply gender. ◦ Not: Executives and their wives ◦ But: Executives and their spouses

Use Nondiscriminatory Language Omit information about group membership. ◦ Not: Connie Green performed the job well for her age. ◦ But: Connie Green performed the job well.

Use Nondiscriminatory Language If you do not know a reader's gender, use a nonsexist salutation. ◦ Not: Dear Gentlemen: ◦ But: To Whom it May Concern:

Stress the Benefits For the Reader Write from the reader's perspective. A reader will often read a document wondering "What's in it for me?" It is your job to tailor your document accordingly. ◦ Not: I am processing your order tomorrow. ◦ But: Your order will be available in two weeks.

Write at an Appropriate Level of Difficulty Consider your audience and prepare your writing so that the reader will clearly understand what it is that you are saying. Do not use complex passages or terms that the reader will not understand.