PEE Point Evidence Explanation

Point The idea you intend to argue/present

Evidence Supporting example or statistic PROVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

Explanation Explain your evidence and how it supports or connects to your point

Answers to strip sentences

Point China is overcrowded. Evidence The population of China is 1.3 billion people. Explanation Despite the fact that China is a large country, its habitable land is limited.

Now the complete sentences… China is overcrowded. The population of China is 1.3 billion people. Despite the fact that China is a large country, its habitable land is limited.

Point Beijing’s pollution negatively impacts the health of its residents. Evidence Residents of Beijing develop lung cancer at a much higher rate than residents of comparable cities around the world. Explanation Medical professionals directly attribute early onset of lung cancer to the high levels of pollution.

Beijing’s pollution negatively impacts the health of its residents. Residents of Beijing develop lung cancer at a much higher rate than residents of comparable cities around the world. Medical professionals directly attribute early onset of lung cancer to the high levels of pollution.

P.E.E. with a topic sentence

Topic Sentence There are many factors that influence the quality of education in schools around the world. Point International schools with high levels of diversity provide a well rounded education for student. Evidence In interviews with graduating students from international schools, it has been found that students value the diversity of opinions and view points in the classroom. Explanation Being exposed to diverse values and opinions helps to challenge student’s personal views and clarify them.

There are many factors that influence the quality of education in schools around the world. International schools with high levels of diversity provide a well rounded education for student. In interviews with graduating students from international schools, it has been found that students value the diversity of opinions and view points in the classroom. Being exposed to diverse values and opinions helps to challenge student’s personal views and clarify them.

Topic Sentence Some Chinese cities have consistent weather patterns while others vary greatly. Point Beijing’s weather is extremely diverse. Evidence Summer temperatures rise in to the upper 30’s with high humidity while winter temperatures can fall below zero with gusting winds. Explanation Beijing’s summer weather comes from southern china while winter weather comes from Russia.

Some Chinese cities have consistent weather patterns while others vary greatly. Beijing’s weather is extremely diverse. Summer temperatures rise in to the upper 30’s with high humidity while winter temperatures can fall below zero with gusting winds. Beijing’s summer weather comes from southern China while winter weather comes from Russia.

P.E.E. in a Paragraph

Topic sentence Japan’s modern economy has been influenced heavily by its geography.

PEE 1 For example, Japan’s lack of natural resources has forced it to become more energy efficient. Statistics show that the average Japanese person uses forty percent less energy than the average American. This focus on energy efficiency has helped Japanese car manufacturers become extremely competitive in international markets.

PEE 2 Further more, Japan’s lack of natural resources, petroleum in particular, has made it reliant on imports from abroad to power its economy. Japan depends on the Middle East for the majority of its oil. Relying so heavily on foreign energy sources makes Japan’s economy vulnerable because of potential supply disruptions.

Japan’s modern economy has been influenced heavily by its geography. For example, Japan’s lack of natural resources has forced it to become more energy efficient. Statistics show that the average Japanese person uses forty percent less energy than the average American. This focus on energy efficiency has helped Japanese car manufactures become extremely competitive in international markets. Further more, Japan’s lack of natural resources, petroleum in particular, has made it reliant on imports from abroad to power its economy. Japan depends on the Middle East for the majority of its oil. Relying so heavily on foreign energy sources makes Japan’s economy vulnerable because of potential supply disruptions.