Compare this model to your example & explanation sentences Secondly, these animals can cost a lot of money (2). Feeding a tiger, crocodile, or python is much different than going to a local store to buy dog- food. The cages or shelters they need can also cost a lot of money. For instance, the article notes that Felicia’s parents spend hundreds of thousands of dollars each year to care for the tiger (2 ). Example / reason it is bad. I got this idea from the article. These are my thoughts to explain the cost. No page number. This is a quote from the story to use as an explanation. It needs a page number.

Editing & Revising: You should spent AT LEAST 10 minutes on this 1. First read. Read through your entire paragraph OUT LOUD (by whispering under your breath). When you come across sentences/words/ideas that sound weird, fix them! 2. Second read. Since it is assumed that you have already run spell check, double check your paper for:  words that might not be spelled “wrong,” but they are not the correct spelling for what you mean  appropriate capital letters—if it is capitalized in the article, it should be capitalized in your essay!  The spelling, capitalization, and punctuation of the article match the prompt  Page numbers—they should be there AND they should be formatted correctly!  Transition words: don’t forget them in your topic sentences, either!  Contractions: didn’t, shouldn’t, can’t, won’t,etc. REMEMBER TO READ CHAPTERS for Tuesday!!

When you name your file… 1. Name your Google document with the same EXACT format as this example: 2, Brown, Charlie, Essay 2 2. Copy and paste your essay from Pages into this document. 3. Remember that when you copy and paste your words from Pages, sometimes the formatting changes a a bit. 4. Make sure the “Can Edit” option is selected. 5. Share to once you are confident that your essay looks the way it