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Composition 1 Last night, John had a party with his friends in the KTV. In order to celebrate his birthday. They chatted and drank beer happily. It was too late when they found, so they decided to go home. Last night, in order to celebrate his birthday, John had a party with his friends in a KTV. They chatted and drank beer happily. Not until John got a call from his wife did he know it was too late. Thus, they decided to go home.

Composition 2 Last night, Jack and his friends had a party to celebrate Cindy ’ s twenty-five year old birthday. They hadn ’ t seen each other for a long time after they graduated from the university. For this very reason, Jack unconsciously drunk plenty of wine and was dead drunk at the end of the party. At midnight, all of them were drunk. At that time, Jack ’ s mother called him back quickly. Although Jack was drunk, he still wanted to drive his car. Last night, Jack and friends had a party to celebrate Cindy ’ s twenty-five-year-old birthday. They hadn ’ t seen each other for a long time after they graduated from university. For this very reason, Jack unconsciously drank plenty of wine and was dead drunk at the end of the party. At midnight, all of them were drunk. At that time, Jack got a call from his mother, which asked him to go him as soon as possible. Although Jack was drunk, he still wanted to drive his car.

Composition 3 Last night, it was John ’ s birthday, so his friends invited him to a restaurant to celebrate. Due to the happiness, John and his friends drank a lot in that night. After celebrating, they all wanted to go home for rest. John ’ s friends decided to take a taxi, because they knowed how dangerous it was to drive a car, however, John insisted to drive car, despite the fact that he was drunk. Last night, because of his birthday, John ’ s friends invited him to a restaurant to celebrate. Because they were so happy, John and his friends drank a lot. After the celebration, they all wanted to go home for rest. John ’ s friends decided to take a taxi because they knew how dangerous it was to drive; however, John insisted on driving his car, despite the fact that he was drunk.

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Composition 1 On his way home, he bumped against the tree. Because his wife called him at that time. He got a phone, but he didn ’ t watchout the tree is afront of him. When he wanted to step on the brake, he was bump on the tree. On his way home, he had a car accident. While he was driving, he got a call from his wife. Hearing the ring tone, he tried to pick up his cellphone and answered it. He didn ’ t pay attention to the tree in front of him. When he wanted to step on the brake, it was to late and his car bumped into the tree.

Composition 2 On his way home, he tried to overtake the car in front of him. Suddenly, he lost his control, and he bumped into the tree on the road. Before long, the police came and scolded him mercilessly. After the incident, John murmured to himself, “ I shouldn ’ t drive the car just because it was convenient. I promise I won ’ t drive a car after I am drunk next time. On his way home, he tried to overtake the car in front of him. Suddenly, his car was out of control and it bumped into a tree on the road. Before long, the police came and scolded him mercilessly. After the incident, John promised that he would never drive after he was drunk.

Composition 3 On his way home, Jack had a stomachache. That made him too hurt to drove the car. So he bumped into the tree. Soon after, the police officer came and took Jack into the police station. The police officer gave him a fine. After that, Jack wouldn ’ t drive after drunk again. On his way home, Jack had a stomachache. That caused him so much pain that he couldn ’ t control his car. So it bumped into a tree. Soon after, a police officer came and took Jack into the police station. The police officer gave him a ticket. After that, Jack wouldn ’ t drive after drinking again.