Writing procedures ( 写作流程 ) I. Examining the topic ( 审题 ) II. Making out a draft ( 草稿 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) IV. Checking the mistakes ( 检查 )

I. Examining the topic (审题) a. What's the topic about? b. What's the type of this writing? c. Are there any extra requirements? *underline the information given in the direction.  Graduation.  Li Hua and her friend, Wang Ping.  Three points should be involved in your writing.  A A A Argumentation (议论文)  N N N Narration (记叙文)  E E E Exposition (说明文)  Write words.  Do not reveal your real name.  Be positive. *Read the direction carefully.

II. Making out a draft (草稿) a. Making an outline. b. Listing the key words. c. Listing the sentence structures. *Decide how many paragraphs you are going to write.  Para.1: Your impression of Li Hua.  Para.2: Give one or two examples.  Para.3: Send your best wishes.  g g g graduate, kind, clever, helpful, beautiful... ((((Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.)

III. Writing the composition (成文) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.) e.g.1. Dear Li Hua, I have learned from an advertisement that I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary. I would like you to consider me for the post. My name is Wang Ping.... A Letter of Application (求职信) Sir or Madam,

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.) e.g.2. Dear Li Hua, It is my pleasure to recommend Li Ming, It is my pleasure to recommend Li Ming, my good friend, for his application to work in your company. Li Ming graduated from Beijing Industry University. His major is Computer Software. A Letter of Recommendation (推荐信) Mr Li Hua,

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing e.g.3. Dear Li Hua, I am writing to show my thanks to you. I am writing to show my thanks to you. You tutored me in my spoken English before you went to Beijing. With your help I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. Thank you very much. A Letter of Thanks (感谢信)

Are these beginnings suitable? Are these beginnings suitable?  Hi! Li Hua. I'm Wang Ping. It's time for us to say goodbye.... say goodbye....  It has been 3 years since you went to Australia and we haven't made contact with Australia and we haven't made contact with each other for a long time.... each other for a long time....  Long time no see. How are you? I'm fine....  I am very glad to have an opportunity to write down some words for you. write down some words for you. Dear Li Hua,

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.) Dear Li Hua, I can’t believe we will soon be graduating; I can’t believe we will soon be graduating; the time has flown by so quickly! It’s time to say goodbye. I have really enjoyed these past three years as your classmate. A Goodbye Letter before Graduation ( 毕业留言 ) ( 毕业留言 ) e.g.4.

III. Writing the composition (成文) Para.2: Give one or two examples. Para.2: Give one or two examples. Problem 1:...You are my best friend. You always help me and give me suggestion when I was in trouble. You have a wide range of interests. You can play the guitar, football and table tennis. You can also serve as a bridge between leaders and students, so teachers are able to help us in an efficient way... 缺乏主题、不知所云

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) Para.2: Give one or two examples. Para.2: Give one or two examples. Problem 2:... In my mind, you are very active and good at playing basketball. Besides, you have many other interets. I still remember that day when I had a bad I still remember that day when I had a bad cold. You told me to take medicine and reminded me to wear more clothes. You also gave me your notes and helped me with my study. 印象与事例毫无关系

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) Para.2: Give one or two examples. Para.2: Give one or two examples. Problem 3: Firstly, you are very energetic. you take an active part in various activities and participate in a variety of competitions. Secondly, you are very responsible. Being president of our class, you hold class meetings and parties. And you serve as a bridge between teachers and students. Last but not least, you are very hardworking. You always listen to the teachers carefully. You work diligently every day. You are good at raising questions after class... 无具体事例，视毕业留言为毕业鉴定。

应用文※记叙文  高考中有不少书面表达题，形式是应用文，实质其中心 部分还是议论文、说明文或记叙文。 部分还是议论文、说明文或记叙文。 考察目标：（记叙文）要求考生就提供的信息记人或叙事。 答题妙招：记叙文牢记六要素： 人物、时间、地点、起因、经过 和结果。

Practice writing helpful honest energetic diligent patient responsible humorous considerate Write one example. narration ( 记叙文 ) ：  time  location  character(s)  cause  process  result

IV. Checking the mistakes (检查) a. Spelling mistakes. b. Grammar mistakes.( tense, voice... ) Para 1 & Para 3: Present tense Para 2 : Past tense Para 2 : Past tense

IV. Checking the mistakes (检查) a. Spelling mistakes. b. Grammar mistakes.( tense, voice... ) Para 1 & Para 3: Present tense Para 2 : Past tense Para 2 : Past tense

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.) e.g.6. Dear students, Good news! The Student Union decides Good news! The Student Union decides hold a music week in the first week of May. The activities include singing pop songs, playing classical and folk music. An Announcement（通知）

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the puropose of your writing.) e.g.5. Dear Sir, I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school day, I've caught a cold because I swam in the school's swimming pool yesterday. Asking for Leave (请假条)

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) (Beginning: Tell the purpose of your writing.) e.g.4. Dear Zhang Hong, Thank you for your letter dated Sept.16. It Thank you for your letter dated Sept.16. It wasn't until yesterday that I got it, as I had been out on business for a week. In your letter, you told me that... A Letter in Reply (回信)

III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) III. Writing the composition ( 成文 ) Para.3: Send your best wishes. Problem: B Best wishes. K Keep in touch. D Don't forget me. H Happy every day..... 太过简洁，表达不清。