1994 Use of English Section E – Marking Scheme Task 2

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1994 Use of English Section E – Marking Scheme Task 2 Points 1. Introductory para mention of Concerned Father’s letter mention of publication in Hong Kong Daily News [or your newspaper] mention of date the letter was published

2. Introductory para (must be mentioned near the beginning) mention of subject matter [video games installed in Youth Club] purpose of writing the letter [to refute the allegations/ reassure Concerned Father or newspaper readers] 3. Parents unaware of installation all parents informed by the club mention of newsletter

4. ‘long hours’ range of activities provided to prevent ‘long hours’ being spent guidelines being issued, which include time limits 5. ‘Small dark airless spaces’ well-lighted and ventilated

admission of danger because of lack of exercise/ poor diet 6. Cholesterol problem admission of danger because of lack of exercise/ poor diet reference to one of the following: ‘Video Addicts Playing Deadly Game’ (Daily News) 3.2.94 ‘Games Cause Heart Problems’ 16.2.94 ‘Health Danger for sports Dropouts’ 1.3.94

7. Lack of exercise mention of club’s range of activities providing exercise/ club encourages exercise/ offers coaching mention of guidelines [play sport/ keep physically fit and healthy]

8. ‘play video games which provide no interaction at all’ video games provide interaction supported by mention of ‘The Interactive Computer Game’ by G R & E Loftus or use of quotation/ paraphrase from Loftus 9. Broken arms these machines withdrawn from use reference to article in Hong Kong Herald, 19.1.94, ‘Arm Wrestling Games Removed.’

10. Muscular strain acknowledgement that this can happen with overuse mention of at least one source 11. Muscular strain range of activities lessons risk of overuse guidelines provided on overuse

12. Epilepsy denial that games cause epilepsy/ explanation that they don’t mention of press article by Dr Leigh ‘Do Computer Games cause Epilepsy?’ in Outlook, 10.3.94 or Terry O’Leary ‘Warning: Play at Your Own Risk’ Hong Kong Herald, 7.2.94 13. Violent content of games Games in club selected to avoid needless violence (as explained to parents in newsletter)

14. Violent crime rising acknowledgement that violent crime is rising mention of source [HK Action Against Crime Committee, Report No.6, 1993] 15. Link with crime link between crime and video games not established mention of greater willingness to report crime 16. Triad involvement members carefully screened adult supervision

17. No benefit from video games mention of benefits [problem solving/ infer rules and strategies/ improve hand-eye coordination/ attend to many processes at the same time] 18. No benefit from video games mention the Albert Chan thinks that video games have an educational value/ mention of CIVIC education mention of course [Education The Name of the Game, Daily News, 22.1.94]

19. ‘…the KLCC Youth Club will remove these games before it’s too late’ games won’t be removed [allow if very clearly implied] 20. Concluding remarks some attempt to round off the letter in a separate paragraph express hope that ‘Concerned Father’/ readers/ parents will feel reassured (deduct 1 mark if addressed to the wrong person) 21. Yours faithfully [must be completely correct]