The aim of this mission is knowledge. 莒南三中 执教人 : 徐秀霞
Students are asked to improve the skills in: I. Grasping the structure, the most common conjunctions and expressions usually used in writing an argumentation. II. Writing an excellent argumentation. Teaching aims :
Presentation 1. The passage mainly talk about ______. A. the contradiction between economists and the business community B. the present debate on economic growth C. the advantages and disadvantages of economic growth D. the importance of the debate on economic growth 2. How many opinions are there about the economic growth? What are they? Two. Some are for the economic growth and some criticize /are against it..
1. What does the underlined word “ proponents ” in Para 3 most probably mean? Supporters/ People who argue for something. 2. What does the underlined sentence mean in Chinese? 当社会在这些方面到达极限时, 经济增长将不 在继续, 人们的生活质量将会下降。
1.What ’ s the type of writing of the passage? How do you know? An argumentation. 2. What do you think of the passage? Why?
There is much discussion today about whether economic growth is desirable. At an earlier period our desire for material wealth may have been justified. Now, however, this desire for more than we need is causing serious problems. Even though we have good intentions., we may be producing too much, too fast. Those who criticize economic growth argue that we must slow down. They believe that society is approaching certain limits on growth. These include the fixed supply of natural resources, the possible negative effects of industry on the material environment, and the continuing increase in the world ’ s population. As society reaches these limits, economic growth can no longer continue and the quality of life will decrease. People who want more economic growth, on the other hand, argue that even at the present growth rate there are still many poor people in the world. Besides, these proponents of economic growth believe that only more growth can create the capital needed to improve the quality of life in the world. Furthermore, they argue that only continued growth can provide the financial resources to protect our natural surroundings from industrialization. This debate over the desirability of continued economic growth is of vital importance to business and industry. If those who argue against economic growth are correct, the problem they mention cannot be ignored. To find a solution, economists and the business community must pay attention to these problems and continue discussing them with one another.
There is much discussion today about whether economic growth is desirable. At an earlier period our desire for material wealth may have been justified. Now, however, this desire for more than we need is causing serious problems. Even though we have good intentions., we may be producing too much, too fast. Those who criticize economic growth argue that we must slow down. They believe that society is approaching certain limits on growth. These include the fixed supply of natural resources, the possible negative effects of industry on the material environment, and the continuing increase in the world ’ s population. As society reaches these limits, economic growth can no longer continue and the quality of life will decrease. People who want more economic growth, on the other hand, argue that even at the present growth rate there are still many poor people in the world. Besides, these proponents of economic growth believe that only more growth can create the capital needed to improve the quality of life in the world. Furthermore, they argue that only continued growth can provide the financial resources to protect our natural surroundings from industrialization. This debate over the desirability of continued economic growth is of vital importance to business and industry. If those who argue against economic growth are correct, the problem they mention cannot be ignored. To find a solution, economists and the business community must pay attention to these problems and continue discussing them with one another.
Passage 1 It is known to all, education is important. With the social development more and more people who have much good knowledge are need to help our country with development. It is a important reason that I can attend school for free of charge. As we all know, it needs a lot of money at university. As a member of an ordinary family, I am not have enough money to attend university. Finally, becoming a teacher is my dream because my father is a middle school teacher, who make a good influence on me. If I become a teacher,I can devote myself to education in my hometown. At that time, I will very happy. Pre-writing 【经典回放】( 07 山东)
Passage 2 It ’ s inspiring that a number of students will be admitted to colleages free of charge this year on condition that they must work as a teacher in their own province for more than ten years. I would like to be one of these special students. In my opinion, receiving an education like that would not only reduce the expenses but also enable us to make contributions to our country ’ s education carerr. As we all know, fewer and fewer people are willing to be a teacher because of low pay and hard work, especially in the poor areas. It will be dangerous for the development of the teenagers and children in our country. So it ’ s necessary that large numbers of graduates of high qualities devote to the education career. On the other hand, teaching will be a valuable experience and make our lives meaningful. So, let ’ s apply for that and try our best to make efforts for the education of our country. Pre-writing 【经典回放】( 07 山东)
Passage 1 It is known to all, education is important. With the social development more and more people who have much good knowledge are need to help our country with development. It is a important reason that I can attend school for free of charge. As we all know, it needs a lot of money at university. As a member of an ordinary family, I am not have enough money to attend university. Finally, becoming a teacher is my dream because my father is a middle school teacher, who make a good influence on me. If I become a teacher,I can devote myself to education in my hometown. At that time, I will very happy. Pre-writing 【经典回放】( 07 山东)
Pre-writing 【经典回放】( 07 山东) Passage 2 It ’ s inspiring that a number of students will be admitted to colleages free of charge this year on condition that they must work as a teacher in their own province for more than ten years. I would like to be one of these special students. In my opinion, receiving an education like that would not only reduce the expenses but also enable us to make contributions to our country ’ s education carerr. As we all know, fewer and fewer people are willing to be a teacher because of low pay and hard work, especially in the poor areas. It will be dangerous for the development of the teenagers and children in our country. So it ’ s necessary that large numbers of graduates of high qualities devote to the education career. On the other hand, teaching will be a valuable experience and make our lives meaningful. So, let ’ s apply for that and try our best to make efforts for the education of our country.
【精彩再现】 写作分析 : Passage 2 采用了较为典型的议论文写作方式: 提出观点 — 分析问题 — 得出结论。文章观点明确 (愿意),紧扣主题,理由表达充分,具有较强的 说服力。文章能有效地使用连接成份、一些较高级 的词汇和句式结构,有较强的书面表达能力。如: be admitted to, free of charge, on condition that, not only …but also…, make contributions to, as we all know, on the other hand, so, apply for, make efforts 等, 使文章增色不少。
第一部分:提出论点,即文章的主题. 第二部分:摆出有利的事实,对论点 进行严密的论证. 第三部分:根据前面的论证得出结论.
1. 表示 “ 启 ” 的连接词: nowadays, at present, first, firstly, to begin with, first of all 2. 表示 “ 承 ” 的连接词: then, second, secondly, besides, moreover, furthermore, in addition, in fact, for example, meanwhile, similarly, in other words 3. 表示 “ 转 ” 的连接词: but, yet, however, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, fortunately, unfortunately 4. 表示 “ 合 ” 的连接词: in brief, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in general, on the whole, to sum up, as a result
Writing 阅读下面的文字,用英语写一篇 词的短文。 你所在的学校最近规定学生晚上 必须回教室参加晚自修, 引起同学们的 争论。你认为学校应该不应该要求学 生回教室晚自修?请陈述理由。
i) Discussion ii) Oral expression iii) Writing iv) Correction v) Version Writing
【美文共享】 Passage 1 There is much discussion about the requirement that students should study in the classroom in the evening. There are many strong reasons against it. To start with, students should be given the freedom to arrangement their own time after class and no one has the reason and right to take away this freedom. Then there are practical difficulties. For example, students will disturb each other if they study in the same classroom, which may lead to poor effects. What’s more, each student has his own way to arrange his time in the evening and it is a waste of time to change his habit. For those students who live far away from school, there are also problems in convenience and safety. Therefore, I am totally against the requirement of the school. (133words)
【美文共享】 Passage 2 To tell you the truth, I speak up for the requirement that students should study in the classroom in the evening. First of all, school is the best place to get knowledge and we can learn more during the period of time. Secondly, if we meet with some problems in our study, we can have a face-to-face discussion and turn to one another for help. Besides, studying together with other students in the classroom in the evening can make me form a good habit. I will do what I should do and must finish it within the limited time. Furthermore, some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something wrong that will influence their studies or even their future. Personally, the requirement of the school will greatly benefit us. (141words)
【精彩再现】 文章采用了较为典型的议论文写作方式:提出观点 — 分 析问题 — 得出结论, 观点明确(反对 / 支持),紧扣主题,理 由表达充分,具有较强的说服力。同时能有效地使用连接成 分及一些较高级的词汇和句式结构,有较强的书面表达能力。 如: Passage(1): the requirement that sb should, to start with, have the reason and right to, for example, what’s more, a waste of time to do, convenience, therefore 等。 Passage(2): to tell you the truth, speak up for, first of all, secondly, meet with, have a face-to-face discussion, besides, furthermore, once…, do something wrong, personally 等. 使文章增色不少。 范文 1 共 125 词 ; 范文 2 共 141 词 ,符合字数要求。
Homework 【 课外练笔】 I). Fill in the blanks with proper words or phrases. II). Write a composition. 阅读下面的文字,用英语写一篇 词的短文。 在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的英语老师授课时 只用英语,还是英、汉兼用?请围绕 “How do you prefer English classes to be taught ? In English only , or in both English and Chinese ?这个问题, 选择一种授课形式,写一篇 词的英语短文。
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