Module 2A: Unit 2: Lesson 11 Writing and Argument Essay: Peer Critique with Rubric (Chapters 29-31, Including Synthesis of Scenes in Previous Chapters)

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Module 2A: Unit 2: Lesson 11 Writing and Argument Essay: Peer Critique with Rubric (Chapters 29-31, Including Synthesis of Scenes in Previous Chapters)

agenda Opening Engaging the Writer and Review Learning Targets: Focus Questions from Homework (5 minutes) Work Time (35 minutes) Incorporating Evidence in an Argument Essay (20 minutes) Peer Critique Protocol (15 minutes) Closing and Assessment Preview Homework (5 minutes) Homework Work on Essay Planner

materials To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric (one per student and one to display) Document camera Quote Sandwich guide (one per student) Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique (one per student) Peer Critique Expectations and Directions (on chart paper or on white board) Peer Critique recording form (one per student) To Kill a Mockingbird Essay planner (one per student)

Lesson vocabulary Ellipsis Critique Incorporate feedback

Opening: Engaging the Writer and Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) You should sit with your selected Discussion Appointment partner Be sure that you have your structured notes from your homework and work with your partner to share your response to the focus question on the homework: What does Scout mean when she says, “Atticus was right. One time he said you never really know a man until you stand in his shoes and walk around in them. Just standing on the Radley porch was enough”?

Opening continued… Direct your attention to the posted learning targets Read the learning targets: I can critique my partner’s use of evidence using criteria from the To Kill a Mockingbird argument rubric I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner I can write an organized argument essay about To Kill a Mockingbird Add bullet: I can use correct punctuation in my Quote Sandwich

Work time: Analyzing Evidence in an Argument Essay (20 minutes) Distribute To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric It is based on the same rubric that was used to assess your essays in Module 1 Notice things that might be different from what you did in Module 1 Share your ideas “The first row is focused on claim and reasons” “The word argument comes up a lot in the first two rows” “You have to explain how evidence supports your argument” “You have to acknowledge and respond to a counterclaim” “The argument needs to be logical” The Coherence, Style, and Organization Row and the Control of Conventions Row are exactly the same

Work time continued… Be sure you have their novel, To Kill a Mockingbird Distribute the Quote Sandwich guide Read it aloud and follow along silently You did some analysis of the evidence in the model essay in the previous lesson, so this builds from that All three parts of the quote sandwich are very important in order for the reader to understand the evidence and how it develops the reasons and the claim in the essay Get out your copies of the To Kill a Mockingbird model essay, reread the body paragraphs, and circle at least one other example of a quote sandwich Turn and talk to a partner about what you circled and how it supports the reason in the body paragraph Share with the class

Work time continued… “I found another quote sandwich in the first body paragraph. It shows how Mrs. Dubose held herself to high expectations” “In the second body paragraph, the author uses a quote sandwich to show how brave Mrs. Dubose was to try to get over her drug addiction” Using quote sandwiches helps the author logically develop her claim and reasons so that the thinking is clear to the reader Draw your attention to the first quote in the counterclaim paragraph, “She’d have spent the rest of her life on it and died without so much agony, but she was too contrary…” (111) What are the three dots at the end of the quote called, and why are they there at the end of the quote? These dots are called an ellipsis, which is used when omitting part of a quote

Work time continued… Locate another example of where an ellipsis is used in the concluding paragraph You may find it helpful to use the ellipsis when you quote from the novel Distribute the Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique You will practice crafting a quote sandwich, then you will engage in a peer critique protocol today to get feedback on your quote sandwich Get out your Supporting Evidence-Based Claims graphic organizer that you worked on in the previous lesson Choose one reason to focus on, then one piece of evidence that supports the reason Craft a quote sandwich

Work time: Peer Critique Protocol (15 minutes) When you have crafted your quote sandwiches, work with your seat partner for the peer critique protocol Remember peer critique reflects what people often do in their lives outside of school In your work, people get feedback to improve Also, giving feedback can often provide new ideas for one’s own work Look at the Peer Critique Expectations and Directions Review the expectations

Work time continued… These four points are crucial for success: Be kind: Always treat others with dignity and respect. This means we never use words that are hurtful, including sarcasm. Be specific: Focus on particular strengths and weaknesses, rather than making general comments such as “It’s good” or “I like it.” Provide insight into why it is good or what, specifically, you like about it. Be helpful: The goal is to contribute positively to the individual, not simply to be heard. Be sure your comments contribute to improving your partner’s essay plan. Participate: Peer critique is a process to support each other, and your feedback is valued!

Work time continued… The steps for the peer critique Emphasize that this is focused on your quote sandwich Pass out the Peer Critique recording form You will focus your feedback using criteria from the To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric that focuses on claim, reasons, and evidence Review the criteria, for this feedback to be helpful, you should focus only on this specific area and should give lots of feedback Pointing out misspelled words or incorrect punctuation will not be helpful at this point in the writing process

Work time continued… As you are giving each other feedback, circulate around the room You are focused on the criteria of the rubric focused on claim, reasons, and evidence Refocus whole group Revise your quote sandwich by incorporating feedback Point out that feedback may not always be helpful It is up to the author to decide what feedback will help improve his/her work Make sure you are using the feedback well and focusing on annotating the boxes where you need to make changes

Closing and assessment: Preview Homework (5 minutes) Distribute the To Kill a Mockingbird essay planner Point out that there is space for students to plan the five paragraphs of their essay: The introduction The body paragraphs The conclusion For homework tonight, you should take home the Quote Sandwich guide and create the quote sandwiches for Body Paragraphs 1 and 2

Plan Body Paragraphs 1 and 2 in the essay planner homework Plan Body Paragraphs 1 and 2 in the essay planner