Editing parragraphs Transitional Phrases 0. Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 2 Paragraph: (1) Discovery channel.

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Editing parragraphs Transitional Phrases 0

Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 2 Paragraph: (1) Discovery channel is highly educational. (2) It always has interesting topics. (3) Secondly, It gives interesting facts about different subjects. (4) Furthermore, it motivates you to discover more. (6) All and all Discovery Channel is one of the best TV channels Answer choices: A.Next, B.Clearly, C.Finally, D.First of all, 1

Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 3 Paragraph: (1) Traveling by motor boat is an exhilarating experience. (2) First of all, you get to sea dolphins or whales in the ocean. (3) There’s no speed limit in the ocean, you could go as fast as you can (4) Last but not least, traveling by boat lets you experience the strength of nature through the movement of the waves. (5) All and all, boating is fantastic! Answer choices: A.Next, B.Secondly, C.Finally, D.First of all 2

Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 4 Paragraph: (1) Long boarding is liberating. (2) Fist of all, It allows you to get air as you speed through the streets. (3) Secondly, It makes you to feel fast and in control as you swerve through the obstacles. (4) It lets you glide smoothly and feel taller than everyone. All and all, long boarding is an extreme experience Answer choices: A.Next, B.Clearly, C.Finally, D.First of all 3

Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 5 Paragraph: (1) Camping in the mountains is an experience that you should consider carefully. (2) First of all, you have to sleep in a flimsy tent. (3) Secondly, the weather might not be very pleasant. (4) Last but not least, you might encounter a bear, a snake or a mountain lion. (5) Camping in the mountains is not for everyone Answer choices: A.Next, B.Clearly, C.Finally, D.First of all 4

Which of the following is the BEST way for the author to begin sentence 6 Paragraph: (1) How would you like to go fishing? (2) I love going fishing with my family. (3) First of all you don’t have to bring snack, you catch the snack. (4) Secondly, you spend quality time with your family. (5) Finally, fishing is fun and entertaining. (6) Fishing is a great outdoors activity. Answer choices: A.All and all, B.Next, C.Finally, D.First of all 5