When to NOT use commas!
But first….DOL Tony used to win a lot of boxing matches until he hurts his hand and now he can’t be the most bestest fighter out their. (4 errors) Ms. Hanks the nice co-teacher with Mr. Dorrell was standing by the back door. (2 errors)
Do not use a single comma between the subject and verb of your sentence. Incorrect: The professor of my Japanese class, gave a quiz yesterday. Correct: The professor of my Japanese class gave a quiz yesterday. Now you try…. The other day I, pushed Mr. Dorrell down in the snow.
Do not use a comma to separate the paired parts in paired compound subjects or compound verbs.subjects or compound verbs. Incorrect: She lets me watch her mom, and pop fight. Correct: She lets me watch her mom and pop fight. Please fix this one….. They would argue over money, and scream about his late nights.
Do not use commas to separate a noun and its modifying adjectives when the adjectives come before the noun. Incorrect: The bright red, car was a Corvette. Correct: The bright red car was a Corvette. Now you try….. The strong, tough boy used to go to this school.
How to Narrow a Research Topic
When your research topic is too broad, ask yourself these questions: Who? What? When? Where? Why?
How to Narrow a Research Topic Let’s see how this works with an example : eating disorders This topic is too broad (general) to write about in a short paper. We need to make it narrower (more specific).
How to Narrow a Research Topic Who? TOPIC: EATING DISORDERS Populations Age Gender Race or Ethnicity NEW TOPIC: Eating disorders in elderly females
How to Narrow a Research Topic What? TOPIC: EATING DISORDERS Types Anorexia Bulimia Compulsive eating NEW TOPIC: Anorexia in elderly females
How to Narrow a Research Topic When? TOPIC: EATING DISORDERS Timeframes Current or historical view Period of life NEW TOPIC: Bulimia in middle- aged females
How to Narrow a Research Topic Where? TOPIC: EATING DISORDERS Places States Regions Countries NEW TOPIC: Anorexia in Australian women
How to Narrow a Research Topic Why? TOPIC: EATING DISORDERS Evaluate Causes Treatments Outcomes NEW TOPIC: Successful methods for treatment of compulsive eating
How to Narrow a Research Topic Mix n’ Match Combine any number of elements that you derive from asking these questions until you find an interesting topic to research. Some examples: Causes and treatment of anorexia in college athletes Prevalence of bulimia in teen-age males in the United States Changes in treatment for compulsive overeaters, present.