Unit 3 Seminar Presentation Part II Looking ahead to Unit 4…

Unit 4 Discussion In your own words, define a thesis statement and how you create one. In your own words, define a thesis statement and how you create one. What three components are required in a thesis statement? What three components are required in a thesis statement? What is the thesis for your essay? What is the thesis for your essay? How does your thesis identify the main goal of your essay and hint at how you will achieve that goal in your writing? How does your thesis identify the main goal of your essay and hint at how you will achieve that goal in your writing?

What Is A Thesis Sentence? A single sentence with an essay, located at the end of the introductory paragraph. A single sentence with an essay, located at the end of the introductory paragraph. The thesis sentence functions as a "signpost" to signal to the reader the main ideas to come later in the essay. The thesis sentence functions as a "signpost" to signal to the reader the main ideas to come later in the essay.

Biography Thesis Sentence Must include: Your full name in third person Your full name in third person Exact name of employer (can be made up) or name and title of business you want to own Exact name of employer (can be made up) or name and title of business you want to own Three main ideas – personal background, education, professional experience Three main ideas – personal background, education, professional experience Exact job title – can be made up Exact job title – can be made up

Sample Thesis Sentence Cooper Medical Center (exact name of employer) announces that Jane Smith (name in third person), a 2011 graduate of Kaplan University, will bring her exemplary personal background, distinguished educational record, and varied professional experiences (three main ideas) to her new position as Director of Nursing (exact job title).

Sample Thesis Sentence II Using her exemplary personal background, distinguished educational record, and varied professional experiences (three main ideas) Jane Smith (name in third person), a 2012 graduate of Kaplan University, will open Ways and Means (name of business), an upscale consignment shop (type of business), in Dunwoody Village (location).

Stage Three: Outlining Outlining - The third step of the writing process where you sort the ideas you generated in brainstorming, decide which are the best and then place them into an organized structure. This helps you see the "skeleton" of the essay before it is completely written to make sure the order of ideas works well. Outlining - The third step of the writing process where you sort the ideas you generated in brainstorming, decide which are the best and then place them into an organized structure. This helps you see the "skeleton" of the essay before it is completely written to make sure the order of ideas works well.

For the Unit 4 Project, you will submit an outline of your essay.

Creating An Outline Creating An Outline Use the format below for your outline, fill it in with your own sentences, and underline your thesis sentence. Every section should have at least 1 (one) complete sentence about the content you will include in that paragraph: Use the format below for your outline, fill it in with your own sentences, and underline your thesis sentence. Every section should have at least 1 (one) complete sentence about the content you will include in that paragraph: I. Introductory paragraph (general to specific ideas) – II. Thesis sentence: II. Body paragraph 1 III. Body paragraph 2 IV. Body paragraph 3 V. Concluding paragraph (specific to general ideas) The following sample outline is more extensive than yours would be. You would just need the Roman Numerals (I, II, III, IV, V) but the additional information shows you what type of information the paragraph would include.

Sample Outline – Introductory Paragraph I. Introduction A. Richmond Hill Medical Center believes that a caring nursing staff is vital. B. RHMC strives to hire and train dedicated professionals. C. RHMC prides itself on its award winning staff. Thesis sentence: RHMC proudly announces that Martha Cooper, a 2011 graduate of Kaplan University, will bring her exemplary background, education, and personal experience to her new position as Director of Nursing.

Sample Outline – Body Paragraphs II. Martha Cooper’s personal background makes her a fine addition to the staff of RHMC. A. Martha is a native of Virginia. B. Martha has been married for fifteen years to her husband, Bill. C. They have three children, Gwen, Tasha, and George. D. The family enjoys hiking and rafting. Martha volunteers with Habitat for Humanity. III. Martha possesses a solid education that will make her an asset to RHMC. A. She earned an Associate’s Degree in Health Sciences. B. She became a registered nurse. C. She returned to school and earned her BSN D. Martha returned to school at Kaplan and earned her MSN. IV. Martha’s professional experience truly sets her apart. A. Martha began her nursing career almost twenty years ago when she served as a CNA. B. She joined the staff of Plymouth Medical Services as a home health care nurse. C. Martha joined RHMC in its Emergency Services Department twelve years ago. D. She has been a shift supervisor and charge nurse for over seven years.

Sample Outline: Concluding Paragraph V. Richmond Hill Medical Center is pleased to appoint Martha Cooper as its new Director of Nursing. A. Martha’s exemplary personal background, strong commitment to education, and varied professional experiences provide her with the skills she needs. B. She will help RHMC meet the challenges of continuing to fulfill its mission in a rapidly changing healthcare environment. C. Come discover Martha’s skills and attributes at a Community Open House on May 15, 2012, at 7:00 p.m. in the RHMC Professional Building. D. Join the community in congratulating Martha on her new position with the RHMC family

Unit 4 Project In Unit 4, you will post your essay outline so that your instructor can offer suggestions, tips, and comments. Because professional presentation of writing is critical to your success, please compose all projects in MS Word even if you are asked to cut/copy and paste rather than attach. At a minimum, you must run grammar and spelling check before submitting all work. You should also proof carefully for typos and other noticeable mistakes. You also must employ a formal, professional writing style. Do not use chat lingo. For example, do not use "i" for "I.” Do capitalize the first letter of each sentence, and do not use abbreviations like IMHO, TY, etc. All writing assignments must be double-spaced, use Arial or Times New Roman font, and employ a 12-point font size.

Submitting your Outline Put your outline in a Word document. Save it in a location on your computer with your name. For example: macgrottyoutline.doc. Then, upload a copy to the Unit 4 Project Dropbox: Put your outline in a Word document. Save it in a location on your computer with your name. For example: macgrottyoutline.doc. Then, upload a copy to the Unit 4 Project Dropbox: 1. Click on the Dropbox. 1. Click on the Dropbox. 2. Click the link that says Submit an Assignment. 2. Click the link that says Submit an Assignment. 3. In the "Submit to Basket" menu, select Unit 4: Project. 3. In the "Submit to Basket" menu, select Unit 4: Project. 4. In the "Comments" field, include the title of your paper. 4. In the "Comments" field, include the title of your paper. 5. Click the Add Attachments button. 5. Click the Add Attachments button. 6. Follow the steps listed to attach your Word document. 6. Follow the steps listed to attach your Word document. 7. To view your graded work, come back to the Dropbox or go to the Gradebook after your instructor has evaluated it. 7. To view your graded work, come back to the Dropbox or go to the Gradebook after your instructor has evaluated it. Make sure that you save a copy of your submitted outline. Make sure that you save a copy of your submitted outline.

The End! Any last questions? Thanks for your participation, and have a great week!