CONTEXT CLUE HMWK ~ DUE THURS ~  Write an original sentence for each of the 25 vocab words using context clues and signal words.  Highlight/underline context clues and circle signal words  You must use each type of context clue at least twice : Restatement, Example, Comparison, Contrast, & Cause/Effect.  EX. The surreptitious, or stealthy, boy snuck into the movie theater

SUMMARIES MUST INCLUDE Topic Sentence to introduce the point of the text May include author’s purpose Main Ideas Use some supporting details to prove the main ideas Concluding sentence to tie it all together Think about the topic sentence *NO opinions! SUMMARIES

WU: Pronouns (That, Which, or Who) Anna is the one _______rescued the bird. Emma is on the team _______won first place. The product claiming it was “all natural,” ________ appeared in the Sunday paper, is now on sale. THE RUN DOWN THAT – clause that cannot be left out without altering the sentence. WHICH – added, nonessential info (has commas typically) WHO - people THE RUN DOWN THAT – clause that cannot be left out without altering the sentence. WHICH – added, nonessential info (has commas typically) WHO - people

COLLEGE ADMISSION IMPORTANT CRITERIA :  Desire/Work Ethic: How badly do you want to get in to this program?  Standardized Tests (SAT, ACT)  Grades in major classes  Extracurricular Activities  sports, clubs, organizations, church, community, student govt., etc.  Work  Letters of Recommendation  College essay (communication skills/explanation to set you apart)

INTRO TO POETRY The guide to your soul.

WHAT IS POETRY?  Write you own definition of what poetry is. You should consider what poetry:  Has/includes,  looks like,  or any other aspects that you feel strongly relates to poetry.

WHAT IS POETRY? Notable Definitions  "The end of writing is to instruct; the end of poetry is to instruct by pleasing." – SAMUEL JOHNSON  A poem begins with a lump in the throat, a home-sickness or a love- sickness. It is a reaching-out toward expression; an effort to find fulfillment. A complete poem is one where the emotion has found its thought and the thought has found the words.” - ROBERT FROST

WHAT IS POETRY? Notable Definitions Etymology: Poetry comes from the ancient Greek word ποιεω (poieo), which means “I create.”

TERMS TO REVIEW ~ Types of Poems ~  *Ballad  *Sonnet  *Epic  *Elegy  Haiku  Lyric  Ode

TERMS TO REVIEW ~ Poetic Devices~  Figurative Language  Imagery  Onomatopoeia  Oxymoron  Personification  Simile  Metaphor  Repetition - repeat of a phrase throughout  Tone  Mood  Rhyme Scheme  Stanza - named by number of lines  Couplet  Quatrain Difference?

TERMS TO REVIEW ~ Poetic Devices~  Alliteration – Two Types  Assonance - vowels  C onsonance - c onsonants  Allusion – reference to “known” person/event/thing  Greek, Roman, Shakespeare  Meter – rhythm pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line of poetry  Iambic Pentameter  10 syllables, alternating stressed/unstressed  Blank Verse – unrhymed in iambic pentameter  Free Verse – “free” from rhymes, pattern, & form

TERMINOLGOY PARTNER QUIZ Complete the matching quiz on the common poetry terms with your partner. You may use your notes. You must finish before you leave! Good luck! The right words can have great power.

COMMON MISTAKES ~ Poetry Matching ~ FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE - Includes other devices such as simile, metaphor, irony, personification, etc. 1. IMAGERY - descriptive language that enriches writing and creates mental pictures 2. ALLUSION - You can my tanned-leg Juliet and I’ll be your redneck Romeo !” (reference to Shakespeare) 3. ASSONANCE S o, go and kn ow you are my f oe.” 4. CONSONANCE The s ound of s ilence s oothed my s enses.” 5. ONOMATOPOEIA – Woop, woop – that’s the sound… 6. OXYMORON - It’s not hard to find it all a little bitter sweet.

COMMON MISTAKES ~ Poetry Matching ~  LYRIC - type of poem that expresses FEELING  SIMILE- “I love ya like a fat kid loves cake.”  METAPHOR- “ You’re an Xbox and I’m more Atari”  PERSONIFICATION - “Boy you got my heartbeat running away.”  RHYME SCHEME - letters that represent the rhymes in a poem’s line(s) Ex. ABAB CDCD EFEF  QUATRAIN – 4 lines There once was a big brown cat That like to eat a lot of mice. He got all round and fat Because they tasted so nice.  COUPLET – 2 rhyming lines Wave after wave in hills each other crowds As if the deep resolved to storm the clouds.

MOODLE  WHAT IS IT?  On-line program for class work  HOW ARE WE USING IT?  Homework (journals, discussions, reading comp questions, upload projects, etc.)  Tests  WHY ARE WE USING IT?  Exposure to an on-line course  Self-Paced Homework – due dates!  Remediation?

Moodle Today

 MUST BE…  Biography or Autobiography  Of reasonable length and reading level  Approved AND seen by Mrs. Spence by Thursday 10/9  Project: Bi-weekly response on Moodle & Final Project EXTRA CREDIT ~ Individual Book Project~

MOODLE ~ Sign-ups & Assignments ~  LOG ON & ENROLL  Directions are on the board.  EDIT YOUR PROFILE  Add appropriate information if you are interested in sharing (Ex. Picture, interests)  PRACTICE ASSIGNMENTS  Poetry Analysis ( DUE: Today )  Poetry in Music Discussion ( DUE:

WU: Pronouns Watching the new recruits marching in the hot sun, the two drill sergeants made bets on which soldier would be the first to vomit their lunch during the strenuous exercise. When the earthquake shook everyone awake, the family dashed outside without worrying about their possessions in the house. *HINTS: Prep phrases or non-essential info set off by commas WON’T have antecedents

WU: Pronouns Nobody knows, not even the nutritionists, that eating chocolate chip muffins is good for our body. Either the grill crew or the manager of the restaurants chains must give their permission if you want to return a half-eaten sandwich. *HINTS: Prep phrases or non-essential info set off by commas WON’T have antecedents

VOCAB 2 REVIEW (Studying Resources)

VOCAB 2 REVIEW (BINGO) FOR BINGO, YOU MUST FILL OUT YOUR OWN CARD ACCORDINGLY…  Use each word 1x  Add 1 free-space  Use 4 words for a second time SCORING:  Horizontal, vertical, diagonal  Only cross off one word at a time

LIST OF FACTS 1. We feel anonymous, but don’t have much privacy 2. We use the internet every day – personal, business, kids 3. Tracked through our web-searches (Ex. WebMD) 4. Cell phones track location 5. That information can be seen by the govt. or anyone who will pay for it. 6. Companies track us – Ex. Netflix analyzes your renting profile to help make better preferences 7. We have the right to privacy – laws protect it 8. Companies trying to improve privacy terms (Ex. Microsoft’s Bing) 9. Privacy helps businesses make money and enhance user experience NOW, SUMMARIZE ORDER: 1. Topic Sentence on main idea 1. Relevant supporting examples 1. Concluding sentence *NO opinions!

GOOD EXAMPLE O Your online activity is tracked. Your birthday, medical history, and hometown. Most people are on the internet too much. We feel anonymous, but all of that data can be tracked and put into readable form. We want to share so much, we’re less concerned about our privacy. Businesses track our information because they succeed by doing it, but they are still concerned about our privacy. For example, Bing highlights their protection privacy. Privacy is a great thing but so is the exploitation or user information.

GOOD EXAMPLE O In the article “Is Privacy Dead?”, it states that in today’s society or in social networking there is no privacy. Also, it says that we rely on the internet to the point that everything we do is posted and tracked. It also says that this generation of kids rely on the internet. Google is trying to protect our privacy terms. They say it matters. Also, many companies, such as Netflix and Facebook, are trying to become more private to help the user experience and make money. So, privacy is changing, but it is not dead.

ANNOTATING: 1)UNDERLINE: 1)main ideas 2)important examples 2)NOTES: 1)Summarize 2)Clarify 3)Connect 4)Question 3)POETIC DEVICES *HINT: Read poetry by stanzas, using punctuation

WARM-UP Verb Tense Agreement  Before Lydia books her flight to Poland, she had called her grandmother about the visit.  The professor tells her students, who promise they would study quietly for three hours, that she wouldn’t give extra assignments.  My little brother grows two inches during the past year.

 READING POETRY Steps to Success

REMEMBER TO KEEP TRUE TO WHAT IS SAID, NOT YOUR OPINIONS IN SUMMARIZING

BASIC ANALYSIS PROCESS  TALK TO THE TEXT/ANNOTATE  MAIN IDEAS/CONNOTATION  Paraphrase/Summarize  Connotations (Emotional Suggestion)  POET’S ATTITUDE/TONE  How the author feels about a subject  Cite a line to PROVE IT  THEME  universal, opinionated sentence from the author’s perspective about a subject  POETIC DEVICES, RHYME SCHEME, & TYPE OF POEM

Before the World Intruded SummarySimile Theme (subject + author’s opinion)Metaphor Author’s Attitude/Tone

BASIC ANALYSIS PROCESS  TALK TO THE TEXT/ANNOTATE  MAIN IDEAS/CONNOTATION  Paraphrase/Summarize  Connotations (Emotional Suggestion)  POET’S ATTITUDE/TONE  How the author feels about a subject  Cite a line to PROVE IT  THEME  universal, opinionated sentence from the author’s perspective about a subject  POETIC DEVICES, RHYME SCHEME, & TYPE OF POEM

SUMMARIZING: sentences including main ideas & reoccurring examples from the text IN YOUR OWN WORDS (Shorter than original, None of your opinions, but consider the author’s, Review your notes!!!) TONE: attitude + cite proof THEME: universal opinionated sentence from author’s perspective FLOBOTS – “HANDELBARS”

SUMMARIZING: sentences including main ideas & reoccurring examples from the text IN YOUR OWN WORDS (Shorter than original, None of your opinions, but consider the author’s, Review your notes!!!) A guy brags about everything he can do in life. As a kid he masters simple things (songs, writing, etc.), and as he gets older he can master more complex things, both good (inventions, antibiotics, leader) and bad (dictator-like, imprisonment, death) TONE: attitude + cite proof Arrogant – Repeats the phrase “I can…” For example, “I can do anything with no permission” THEME: universal opinionated sentence from author’s perspective People have the ability to do anything in life, but it’s up to them to decide which path they want to take – good or bad. FLOBOTS – “HANDELBARS”

THE ROSE THAT GREW FROM CONCRETE Did you hear about the rose that grew from a crack in the concrete? Proving nature's law is wrong it learned to walk with out having feet. Funny it seems, but by keeping it's dreams, it learned to breathe fresh air. Long live the rose that grew from concrete when no one else ever cared. SAMPLE Summary *Symbolism Author’s Attitude/Tone Theme (subject + author’s opinion) Poetic Devices

EFFECTS ON WRITING : “Imagery evokes the meaning and truth of human experiences not in abstract terms…” relate to ourselves Create Senses – “Feel” for the poem sight, sound, touch, taste, smell Show the personality of the author, hinting at the tone, or help relate the setting/mood to the plot.

CREATING EFFECTIVE IMAGERY: The word spread… innocently like a Kindergarten game of Whisper Down the Alley. Friendly, unassuming message crazily like wild fire, engulfing everything in its path. Destructive, mean message

CREATING EFFECTIVE IMAGERY: List as many happy images as you can Imagery used for mood/setting… Ex. a girl walking home

WITHOUT - Donald Hall DIRECTIONS: Read the poem “Without” by Donald Hall with your partner. It is laced with a TON of imagery, so as you read, think about what the author wants you to picture AND what that means for him. 1)Talk to the Text – 5 pts. *Highlight any lines referencing punctuation! 2)Answer questions – 10 pts.

WITHOUT - Donald Hall 1)Summary 2)Author’s Tone + Example 3)Overall Purpose 4)FORM: The author chose not to use any punctuation or form. Why do you think he did that? Since there is no rhyme scheme or form, what type of poem is it? 5)IMAGERY: Examples of images + why/effect on reader

READING PROCESS  TALK TO THE TEXT  PLOT/THEME  Paraphrase/Summarize  Connotations –  Theme  POET’S ATTITUDE  POETIC DEVICES  *RHYME SCHEME/TYPE OF POEM  OPEN-ENDED QUESTIONS

“Let Evening Come”

LET EVENING COME – Kenyon QUESTIONS TO THINK ABOUT: 1) When the author says “let evening come,” what do you think she is referring to? Explain using support from the poem. 2)WORD CHOICE/IMAGERY: Why do you think the author chose to use the word “evening” and not another reference to night? DIRECTIONS: Read the poem “Let Evening come.” Talk to the Text as you go through the poem. There is a very different use of imagery, so as you read, think about what the author wants you to picture AND what that means for her.

OPEN-ENDED RESPONSES Using A.P.E. Format

WHAT IS IT?  OPEN-END RESPONSES: Analyze some aspect of a text to prove comprehension and critical/deeper thinking. Equivalent to 1-2 body paragraphs Takes to write ANALYZE means to break down a topic into all its parts. Be sure to include all the parts and to tell what makes each part different.

FORMAT  ANSWER – Answer question by rephrasing prompt  PROOF – 1-2 quotes or details from the text that support your answer  EXTEND/ENHANCE –explain how the proof relates back to your answer, give opinion, make outside connection,

SCORING GUIDE

 Analyze what Howard’s thoughts throughout the passage reveal about his personality. Use information from the passage to support your analysis. (Based on the text “Up the Cooly” by Hamlin Garland) SAMPLE OUTLINE

ANSWER CONCLUSION LINE EXAMPLES + EXPLANATION #1 #2 #3

COMPARING POETRY OPEN-ENDED RESPONSE: The poem “Let Evening Come” was written in response to the poem “Without.” Compare and contrast the speaker of the poems. Use support from the text to prove your point.

The art of losing isn't hard to master; so many things seem filled with the intent to be lost that their loss is no disaster. Lose something every day. Accept the fluster of lost door keys, the hour badly spent. The art of losing isn't hard to master. Then practice losing farther, losing faster: places, and names, and where it was you meant to travel. None of these will bring disaster. I lost my mother's watch. And look! my last, or next-to-last, of three loved houses went. The art of losing isn't hard to master. I lost two cities, lovely ones. And, vaster, some realms I owned, two rivers, a continent. I miss them, but it wasn't a disaster. --Even losing you (the joking voice, a gesture I love) I shan't have lied. It's evident the art of losing's not too hard to master though it may look like (Write it!) like disaster. One Art – Elizabeth Bishop

BASIC ANALYSIS PROCESS  TALK TO THE TEXT  PLOT/THEME  Paraphrase/Summarize  Connotations (Emotional Suggestion)  Theme  POET’S ATTITUDE/TONE  How the author feels about a subject  (Ex. Hate, love, confusion, happiness)  Find proof in a line  POETIC DEVICES  *RHYME SCHEME/TYPE OF POEM

Between my finger and my thumb The squat pen rests; snug as a gun. Under my window, a clean rasping sound When the spade sinks into gravelly ground: My father, digging. I look down Till his straining rump among the flowerbeds Bends low, comes up twenty years away Stooping in rhythm through potato drills Where he was digging. The coarse boot nestled on the lug, the shaft Against the inside knee was levered firmly. He rooted out tall tops, buried the bright edge deep To scatter new potatoes that we picked, Loving their cool hardness in our hands. By God, the old man could handle a spade. Just like his old man. PROCESS 1.Talk to the Text 2.Plot / Theme 1.Paraphrase 2.Connotations 3.Theme 3.Poet’s Attitude & Proof 4.Poetic Devices Digging by Seamus Heaney My grandfather cut more turf in a day Than any other man on Toner’s bog. Once I carried him milk in a bottle Corked sloppily with paper. He straightened up To drink it, then fell to right away Nicking and slicing neatly, heaving sods Over his shoulder, going down and down For the good turf. Digging. The cold smell of potato mould, the squelch and slap Of soggy peat, the curt cuts of an edge Through living roots awaken in my head. But I’ve no spade to follow men like them. Between my finger and my thumb The squat pen rests. I’ll dig with it.

OPEN-ENDED QUESTION “Digging”  Analyze the author’s tone. Use information from the poem to support your analysis.  A NSWER (restate prompt with answer)  P ROOF (minimum of 2 explained exs – quote)  E NHANCE/EXTEND (relate each example back to the answer)