A Woman in Front of a Bank
Reading of the Poem
Thesis Williams creates a contrast between the false trust of support found in banks with the strength of a woman
Sense pt. 1 Archetype (universally understood symbol) Columns Strong foundation Holds important buildings up Multiple allusions- Both to very influential men Lenin- communist revolutionary and political figure in the USSR Darwin- English naturalist, evolution
Sense pt. 2 Mood (feeling) Tough; rugged; strong Women holding up the family Columns holding up a bank Motif (re-acurring structure/contrast) Structure Mid sentence breaks Contrast Solid, rock vs. pink, baby carriage Hard words vs. softer words
Sense pt. 3 POW (Point of View) 3 rd Person “Her”, “the woman”, “the bank” Speaker (Narrator) Observer Watching the two stand next to each other and comparing them Theme (Main Idea) Women (the household) and Columns (the business world) Tone (speaker’s attitude) Very opinionated Of what women’s roles are Maybe sexist Which sex had which roles in life
Senses Columns x2 (if you count “pediments”, then 3) Imagery- Uses references to very solid objects while describing the bank but uses softer language while describing the woman “The bank is a matter of columns” “her loosely arranged hair” “a pink cotton dress, bare legged”
Mid - Way Activity In pairs or groups: Draw what is described to you in “A Woman in Front of a Bank” Try to use exact lines / stanzas from the poem for your drawing Be prepared to explain your art work! We will then discuss the similarities and differences between the drawings afterward
Style Personification “but the pediments sit there in the sun to convince the doubting of investments” Metaphor/Hyperbole “upon the world stands, the world of finance, the only world” Simile “’solid as rock’” “whose legs are two columns to hold up her face, like Lenin’s” Irony/Cliché “’solid as rock’” Personification The World of Finance They say it stands or falls Columns Holding up a bank / the financial world
Structure pt. 1 End-Stopped (Line ended with a., - ;) Lines 1, 2, 9, and 18 Period in the middle of a sentence (line 2) Challenging convention of structure Incremental Repetition (line repeated with some differences) “upon which the world stands” “the world of finance” “the only world” Enjambment occurs between each stanza, creates 5 stanzas each 4 lines long “like. convention, unlike invention” Repetition Columns is repeated twice; pediments is also stated, which is similar to the word columns Alliteration “like Lenin's (her loosely arranged hair...)”
Structure pt. 2 Stanza #1 4 lines (7, 2, 5, 5 – syllables) Stanza #2 4 lines (5, 3, 6, 5 – syllables) Stanza #3 4 lines (5, 5, 4, 7 – syllables) Stanza #4 3 lines ( 6, 10, 6 – syllables) Stanza #5 4 lines (5, 4, 3, 7 – syllables)
Sound “Convention”, “Columns” “like Lenin’s (her loosely)...” “Convention” and “Invention” Rhyme Emphasis Weakness of bank
Bank vs. Women Strong View Columns hold up infrastructure Legs hold up woman which hold up the family Weak View Banks = weak (“solid as rock”) Women = weak “sex symbol (“bare legged”) “profusely blonde” “dumb blonde”
End Activity Discuss, in your group, how the roles of women have changed from W.C.W.’s lifetime (1883 – 1963) to now. Flapper 1920s - Today