Research Paper/Speech: Working Outline A general guide to outlining!

Starting my outline… My paper is about education. My big topics are going to be as follows: ► the history of why and how people educate the public, ► the development of new educational initiatives, ► the changes that these have made in the system (both intentional and unintentional), ► the problems that have arisen through these changes, and ► the potential solutions for some of the problems.

Working Outline as List History*Egyptians*Puritans*Plantations Curriculum Movements *Elitist Pool of Knowledge *Basic Skills *International Competition *NCLB Problems *Needs Change *Finances *Unrealistic Expectations Solutions *Choice +School +Course of Study *Finances *Accountability +Parent +Student +Teacher

Outline I. History A. Egyptians B. Puritans C. Plantations 1. Boys 2. Girls II. Curriculum Movements A. Elitist Pool of Knowledge B. Basic Skills C. International Competition D. NCLB III. Problems A. Needs Change B. Finances C. Unrealistic Expectations IV. Solutions A. Choice 1. School 2. Course of Study B. Finances C. Accountability 1. Parent 2. Student 3. Teacher

Which number or letter do I use? I. History A. Egyptians B. Puritans 1. Purpose in education 1. Purpose in education a. Productivity a. Productivity b. Indoctrination b. Indoctrination (1) Church (1) Church (2) Society (2) Society 2. Institutions of learning 2. Institutions of learning II. Developments Start by using capital Roman numerals, then capital letters, and then numbers. Start over again with lower case letters and then subscript numerals in parenthesis. See me if you want to subdivide further, but if you keep subdividing, it’s probably more detail than is necessary for this assignment!

Parallelism: It’s not just for math anymore! ► If you start your heading using a noun, then start ALL headings and sub headings with a noun. ► If you start your heading using a verb, then start ALL headings and sub headings with a verb.

Parallelism Example 1: I. History A. Egyptians B. Puritans C. Plantations 1. Boys 2. Girls II. Developments III. Changes IV. Problems V. Solutions (Notice: They are all nouns.)

Parallelism Example 2 I. Know the process A. Read the instructions B. List needed supplies C. Schedule the required time II. Practice the skills A. Use scrap materials B. Continue to practice until achieving desired result III. Buy the supplies IV. Work consistently V. Complete the project (Notice that these start with verbs!)

Subdivisions: They’re not just for dwellings any more! ► Each subheading should be to subdivide the heading. ► Start with the broad idea and divide down to more specific ideas. ► CAUTION: It works like fractions, though. If you subdivide a heading, you must divide it into at least two parts!

My main topics… ► I’ve divided the broad topic of education into five main subtopics: ► (I cannot have just one subtopic because 1 main topic divided into 1 subtopic is still 1.) ► See…it’s just like fractions! Can there be three subtopics? Yes! Any number other than 1 will work! I. History II. Developments III. Changes IV. Problems V. Solutions

Subdivisions Example: I. History A. Egyptians B. Puritans 1. Purpose in education 1. Purpose in education a. Productivity a. Productivity b. Indoctrination b. Indoctrination (1) Church (1) Church (a) Values (b) Laws (2) Society (2) Society 2. Institutions of learning 2. Institutions of learning a. Home a. Home b. Church b. Church c. College c. College II. Developments

It shouldn’t be that hard! ► The problem is that there is a specific format. Sometimes, it feels like a difficult task to get your information to fit into that format. ► As you’re outlining, just think of each heading as a pie to be divided into pieces! ► As you’re outlining, just think of each heading as a pie to be divided into pieces! ► CAUTION: WORD does not correctly outline for you. You need to be able to do this on your own!

A Twist on the Outline ► On your outlines, I want to you write your thesis statement at the top of the page. Your thesis should answer my question: What is this student going to tell me about _____________________? (insert subject) ► Also, you must annotate – use parenthetical citation to tell me which of your resources provided you with your information. More on this later.

Thesis Example: ► Even though history has shown curricula to reflect the needs of society, American curricula constantly changes in design with new problems being addressed with each approach and posed solution.

Does this thesis reflect what is to be discussed in the paper? ► First, we should look back to the outline to review the topics.

I. History II. Developments III. Changes IV. Problems V. Solutions Even though history has shown curricula to reflect the needs of society, American curricula constantly changes in design with new problems being addressed with each approach and posed solution.

It’s in there! ► Yes, each topic is referenced! ► Do I need to develop a thesis that covers the subtopics? ► No, that would be giving far too much detail! ► Now, one last look…

Thesis: Even though history has shown curricula to reflect the needs of society, American curricula constantly changes in design with new problems being addressed with each approach and posed solution. I. History A. Egyptians B. Puritans C. Plantations 1. Boys 2. Girls II. Developments A. Curricula B. Structure C. Facilities III. Changes A. Programs B. Laws 1. EIA 2. ADA 3. NCLB a. Intentions b. Outcomes C. Studies IV.Problems A. Funding B. Accountability C. Problems within the school V.Solutions A. Choice B. Incentives

Annotations: sources for your information should be listed in your outline parenthetically. I. History (World Book) A. Egyptians B. Puritans (Carpenter 48-51) C. Plantations 1. Boys 2. Girls II. Developments (Dewey) A. Curricula (Marzano 668) B. Structure C. Facilities (Jones ) NOTE: you will not have an annotation for every item, but for many. If the majority of your information for main idea comes from the same source then put the annotation with the main idea. If you information from an additional source for a subtopic or detail put an annotation with that.

Good Luck A wonderful resource for you is available at Google OWL with the topic, such as “OWL commas” and it will take you to the desired subsection. Outlining is available at esource/544/01/