Writing the Self Account in SLP and OEA Additional Information in JUPAS

Word Limit Self Account in SLP Chinese : max words English : max words JUPAS OEA additional information max. 500 words

Your Self Account helps you to: Be better organized, reflect on your strengths and weakness Plan Give people information Prepare for a review or an interview

Getting Ready for Writing Career Mapping 生涯地圖, reports, certificates, portfolios, and journals. Arrange records in chronological order. Any achievement, improvement or growth in specific areas? Research the programs or fields of study you are interested in. Try Worksheet 1: Brainstorming Exercise on Self-Account / Personal Statement (p.24)

Rule of the Game Avoid redundancy Don’t just recite your academic performance and /or courses taken

Good writing Demonstrate originality and honesty Enthusiasm Your unique experiences Well chosen theme and focus Your potential or skills that will make you successful in university Substantial evidence

Poor writing Copycat of old essays and template Restate information that can be found elsewhere Unclear, disorganized and boring Lists of one’s ability and skills without evidence

Clear Goals and Stay Reflective Keep your goals in mind Introducing yourself and describing your potential Identify certain key “defining moments” in your life. Understanding and learning more about yourself (p. 26) Choosing a theme (p.26) Try Worksheet 2: Writing a Good Personal Statement Takes Time (p.28)

Engaging in Writing Writing your story with your own voice Speak from your own experiences but not just making a statement of your dream and desire

Writing Skills and Organization Your writing illustrates your attitude, abilities and skills : - language - organization skills - creativity and ability to present your ideas - proofreading and revision skills - attitude in working out something important

Some tips on writing Keep introductory paragraph short, precise but attractive Include events, experiences and activities selected in main body Always provide evidence Be specific and detailed Don’t repeat your introduction in the conclusion.

Good Introduction Grab the attention of the reader You may include opening as - a question - a quote that you like - a dialogue - a startling statement (not exaggerating though) - avoid examples on p.30

The Main Body Do not list all activities or achievements Choose events that - help others understand who you are - develop your talents - have a long-lasting impact on your mission and personality

Conclusion Don’t merely restate your introduction Round up impact of experiences you have Connect you to the programs interested Give the reader a positive impression of you Study the sample personal essay on p.32

Read, rewrite and review Eliminate redundancy Look for consistency Provide evidences Proofread carefully Invite comments from your supporting partner