Danni Hendrix & Allison King ECED 4300-B Dr. Tonja Root Fall 2009 Grade level: 5 th Specific form of writing: Definition Poetry Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Prewriting & Drafting Allison King GPS: ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing: the student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Prewriting & Drafting PLO: The students will plan and write a rough draft of a definition poem using a graphic organizer. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Definition Poetry Form of free verse that uses a selection of short phrases to define an idea or concept. Can use metaphors. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Prewriting & Drafting Prewriting-first stage of the writing process where you plan to write. must include: – topic – form – audience – purpose  graphic organizer  teacher models Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Prewriting & Drafting Drafting-putting ideas onto paper. – ideas from graphic organizer – skip lines  teacher models Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Graphic Organizer for Definition Poetry King, A. (2009.) Definition poetry graphic organizer. Unpublished manuscript graphic organizer, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

List the word: List three things ____________ is: Go into further detail about what ______________ is: Name: _______________ Date:_________________ Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Published Example #1 Okpara, C. (n.d.) Beauty Retrieved October 15, 2009, from beauty-119/ Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Beauty is a pretty face. Beauty is a brand new vase. Beauty is lovely hair. Beauty is an oak wooden chair. Beauty is a graceful smile. Beauty is a great sense of style. Beauty is a fragrant smell. Beauty is a 5 star hotel. Beauty is a nice toned body. Beauty surely isn’t shoddy. Beauty is sleek smooth skin. True beauty is deep within. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Practice Activity (prewriting) 5 th grade Topic: Happiness state 3 things happiness is shared pen collaborative graphic organizer Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Practice Activity (drafting) 5 th grade use collaborative graphic organizer discuss ideas shared pen complete thoughts Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Assessment Activity (prewriting) 5 th grade pick topic audience- classmates purpose-to define think about topic Use metaphors describe complete graphic organizer Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Assessment Activity (drafting) 5 th grade use graphic organizer form complete sentences Write legibly Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Revision & Editing Danni Hendrix GPS: ELA5W4 The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Revision & Editing b. Revises manuscripts to improve the meaning and focus of writing by adding, deleting, consolidating, clarifying, and rearranging words and sentences. c. Edits to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, etc. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Revision & Editing PLO: A. The students will revise their draft by adding, deleting, changing, and rearranging for content. B. The students will edit their revised draft to correct mechanical errors (spelling, punctuation, and capitalization.) Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Definition Poetry Form of free verse that uses a selection of short phrases to define an idea or concept. Can use metaphors. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Revision & Editing Revision- adding, deleting, changing, and rearranging for content Editing- correcting grammatical errors (spelling, punctuation, and capitalization)  teacher models Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Revision & Editing Proofreader’s Marks for revision Proofreader’s Marks for editing Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

GTO CalComp. (n.d.) Proofreader’s Marks. Retrieved May 22, 2007, from the GTO CalComp Web site: terwritebackgrounds/proofreader_ marks.gif Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Published Example #2 Courage is what makes us. Courage is what divides us. Courage is what drives us. Courage is what stops us. Fauchon, C. (n.d.) Courage Retrieved October 15, 2009, from Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Practice Activity (revision) 5 th grade revise (add, delete, change, and rearrange) collaboration for content discuss responses shared pen Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Practice Activity (editing) 5 th grade correct mechanical errors in collaboration (spelling, punctuation, and capitalization) discuss corrections shared pen Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Assessment Activity Revision & Editing revise (add, delete, change, and rearrange) individual definition poetry for content edit individual definition poetry for mechanical errors (spelling, punctuation, and capitalization) Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B

Published Example #3 Krauss, R. (1952). A hole is to dig: A first book of first definitions. New York: Harper and Row. Hendrix, D., King, A., ECED 4300-B