Paragraph Analysis EEL 3008. Today’s Aims Take up last week’s homework Topic Sentence Paragraph Analysis.

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Paragraph Analysis EEL 3008

Today’s Aims Take up last week’s homework Topic Sentence Paragraph Analysis

A Career in the Sky If you are looking for an interesting career, think about becoming a flight attendant. First of all, flight attendants receive a large amount of training for their job. They learn about interpersonal skills, customer service, and safety. Second, every time flight attendants go to work, their scenery changes. They could be in Bali one day and Hawaii the next. Sometimes they even get to stay one or two days in a city before flying home. In addition, flight attendants get bargain prices on airline tickets for vacation. Imagine spending no more than a small percentage of the regular price for any flight! Finally, flight attendants get to meet a wide variety of people from all over the world. For a truly exciting career, consider becoming a flight attendant because the benefits are worth it.

Paragraph Analysis 1.Underline the topic sentence. What is its purpose? 2. Of the 10 sentences, which ones are supporting sentences? How do you know? 3. Underline the concluding sentence. What is its purpose? 4. Find the 4 transition signals. What purpose do they serve?

Paragraph Analysis 1.Underline the topic sentence. What is its purpose? 2. Of the 10 sentences, which ones are supporting sentences? How do you know? 3. Underline the concluding sentence. What is its purpose? 4. Find the 4 transition signals. What purpose do they serve?

A Career in the Sky If you are looking for an interesting career, think about becoming a flight attendant. First of all, flight attendants receive a large amount of training for their job. They learn about interpersonal skills, customer service, and safety. Second, every time flight attendants go to work, their scenery changes. They could be in Bali one day and Hawaii the next. Sometimes they even get to stay one or two days in a city before flying home. In addition, flight attendants get bargain prices on airline tickets for vacation. Imagine spending no more than a small percentage of the regular price for any flight! Finally, flight attendants get to meet a wide variety of people from all over the world. For a truly exciting career, consider becoming a flight attendant because the benefits are worth it.

Paragraph Analysis 1.Underline the topic sentence. What is its purpose? 2. Of the 10 sentences, which ones are supporting sentences? How do you know? 3. Underline the concluding sentence. What is its purpose? 4. Find the 4 transition signals. What purpose do they serve?

A Career in the Sky If you are looking for an interesting career, think about becoming a flight attendant. First of all, flight attendants receive a large amount of training for their job. They learn about interpersonal skills, customer service, and safety. Second, every time flight attendants go to work, their scenery changes. They could be in Bali one day and Hawaii the next. Sometimes they even get to stay one or two days in a city before flying home. In addition, flight attendants get bargain prices on airline tickets for vacation. Imagine spending no more than a small percentage of the regular price for any flight! Finally, flight attendants get to meet a wide variety of people from all over the world. For a truly exciting career, consider becoming a flight attendant because the benefits are worth it.

Paragraph Analysis 1.Underline the topic sentence. What is its purpose? 2. Of the 10 sentences, which ones are supporting sentences? How do you know? 3. Underline the concluding sentence. What is its purpose? 4. Find the 4 transition signals. What purpose do they serve?

A Career in the Sky If you are looking for an interesting career, think about becoming a flight attendant. First of all, flight attendants receive a large amount of training for their job. They learn about interpersonal skills, customer service, and safety. Second, every time flight attendants go to work, their scenery changes. They could be in Bali one day and Hawaii the next. Sometimes they even get to stay one or two days in a city before flying home. In addition, flight attendants get bargain prices on airline tickets for vacation. Imagine spending no more than a small percentage of the regular price for any flight! Finally, flight attendants get to meet a wide variety of people from all over the world. For a truly exciting career, consider becoming a flight attendant because the benefits are worth it.

Paragraph Analysis 1.Underline the topic sentence. What is its purpose? 2. Of the 10 sentences, which ones are supporting sentences? How do you know? 3. Underline the concluding sentence. What is its purpose? 4. Find the 4 transition signals. What purpose do they serve?

A Career in the Sky If you are looking for an interesting career, think about becoming a flight attendant. First of all, flight attendants receive a large amount of training for their job. They learn about interpersonal skills, customer service, and safety. Second, every time flight attendants go to work, their scenery changes. They could be in Bali one day and Hawaii the next. Sometimes they even get to stay one or two days in a city before flying home. In addition, flight attendants get bargain prices on airline tickets for vacation. Imagine spending no more than a small percentage of the regular price for any flight! Finally, flight attendants get to meet a wide variety of people from all over the world. For a truly exciting career, consider becoming a flight attendant because the benefits are worth it.

Support KINDS OF SUPPORTING SENTENCES Explain: The family moved from the village to the capital for economic reasons. Describe: She lived in a lovely, three-story castle surrounded by a forest. Give reasons: Larry finally quit his job because of the stressful work conditions. Give facts: More than ten percent of the university’s student population is international. Give examples: Oranges and grapefruits are now grown in California. Define: My grandmother has a samovar, which is a large copper tea urn.

Read the Passage below: There are too many people who visit Shinsegae on the weekends. It’s just too crowded to enjoy myself. It is very difficult to find a good parking spot and room to walk without bumping into people. Every department store is going to be crowded on the weekends because that’s when most people have free time. It’s super crowded on holidays. I am unable to go because it’s far too stressful. I often go to Shinsegae on the weekdays. It’s the only time I can go and enjoy my shopping experience.

Read the passage below: There are too many people who visit Shinsegae on the weekends. As a result, it’s just too crowded to enjoy myself. Furthermore, it is very difficult to find a good parking spot and room to walk without bumping into people. Granted, every department store going to be crowded on the weekends because that’s when most people have free time. Likewise, it’s super crowded on holidays; therefore, I am unable to go because it’s far too stressful. In the end, I often go to Shinsegae on the weekdays. In fact, it’s the only time I can go and enjoy my shopping experience.

Transitions / Transitional signals Gives the reader signs as to how you are organizing your writing. Without transitional signals the reading can feel awkward and fragmented.