Effective Court Reports Patrick Ayre Department of Applied Social Studies University of Luton.

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Effective Court Reports Patrick Ayre Department of Applied Social Studies University of Luton

Reporting to the Court Two main purposes: To help the court to decide if there are grounds for making an order To help the Court to decide what action, if any, should be taken

Reporting to the Court May seem like a chore BUT: Can get everything down (less risk of forgetting something or missing it out) You can check the information and make sure it is accurate. You can spend time thinking about how you express things The Court and the other parties will read in advance, so may have less time in the witness box: –Should only be asked about disputed parts of the statement –The other side may not need to ask questions or may even fold!

Statements must Be signed and dated Include a prescribed formal declaration Have various case related details in the top right hand corner of the first page. Theoretically, anything which meets these requirements is OK. However…

Selling you opinion Presentation Content

Presentation Make it pretty and easy to read –Neat –Double spaced –One side only –Numbered paragraphs and pages

Language Good grammar Good sentence construction Simple sentences No unnecessary, unexplained jargon Appropriate tone (formal so no slang, no contractions, no use of first names for adults) Sensitively phased (but not watered down)

Content problems Incomplete Biased Conclusions and recommendations poorly argued and justified (or absent altogether)

What do they want to know? Who you are Why you are reporting The facts of the case The conclusions to be drawn from the facts

Introduction Qualifications & current employment Experience and expertise How long involved with family and capacity Purpose of statement (‘in support of application for’...) Sources of information from which the report is compiled

The facts Family composition (attach a genogram) Background history (family and individual) Recent events (including the results of any assessment undertaken during the case)

The facts Tell the story chronologically without too much editorialising Facts sufficient to satisfy the threshold criteria or to justify the recommendations made (and also to refute counter arguments) First hand evidence is best but give source of any information (Can include hearsay) Where facts are disputed either omit or say so Make sure that you have put information as fully and accurately as possible (Checklist: Who, what, when, where, how)

Bias and Balance Include information favourable to the other side as well as that favourable to yours It is your job to make judgements but: –avoid empty evaluative words like inappropriate, worrying, inadequate –Give evidence for descriptive words like cold, dirty and untidy Beware the danger of facts

Bias and Balance Born in 1942, he was sentenced to 5 years imprisonment at the age of 25. After 5 unsuccessful fights, he gave up his attempt to make a career in boxing in 1981 and has since had no other regular employment

Conclusions and recommendations Problems: Unsupported assertions or judgements Inability or unwillingness to analyse and draw conclusions

Conclusions and recommendations Summarise the main issues and the conclusions to be drawn from them. (The facts do not necessarily speak for themselves; it is your job to speak for them.) Draw conclusions from the facts and recommendations from the conclusions Explain how you arrived at your conclusions (Have you demonstrated the factual/theoretical basis for each?)

Conclusions and recommendations In particular: Why the Court should not apply the ‘no order’ principle. (Don’t take this for granted.) Application of the welfare checklist to this case (A very useful framework, but do not rely on this to summarise all your evidence) Consideration of the range of powers open to the Court. Assess each relevant option in turn. Discuss and argue the conclusions reached by other parties. Accompanied by a care plan if care order is being sought (including an interim)

Conclusions and recommendations In drawing conclusions be aware of the extent and limitations of your own expertise. Conclusions may be supported by research (Don’t go outside expertise; be careful with new or controversial theories; be aware of counter arguments) In a final report, the recommendation MUST be specific (not either/or) Remember: conclusions may be attacked in only two ways –founded on incorrect information –based on incorrect principles of social work