Jalisa Brown Nija Daniels ECED 4300-A Dr. Tonja Root Spring 2010 Grade Level: 4 th Specific form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Jalisa Brown Stage of Writing: Prewriting GPS: ELA4W4. The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully. Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

PLO: The student will develop a cinquain poem using a graphic organizer. Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry 5 line poem Describes topic, object, or picture Tells a story Total of 22 syllables 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 pattern Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA. Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7 th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: )

Form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry Line 1: One-Word subject: 2 syllables Line 2: Description: 4 syllables Line 3: Action: 6 syllables Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA. Tompkins, G.E. (2009). Language arts: Patterns of practice (7 th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall. (ISBN-13: )

Form of Writing: Cinquain Poetry Line 4: Feeling or observation: 8 syllables Line 5: Describing/renaming subject: 2 syllables Do a brief review of syllables. Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing: Prewriting Beginning stage Foundation; organize thoughts on paper No sentences (words/phrases) Spelling unimportant (this stage) Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing: Prewriting Form: Cinquain Poetry Topic: Puppies (For practice), Turtles (For assessment) Purpose: Describe a subject or picture; tell a story Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA. Cinquain Poetry Graphic Organizer Line 1: 1 Word Subject (2 syllables) Line 2: Description (4 syllables) Line 3: Action (6 syllables) Line 4: Expressing Feeling/Observation (8 syllables) Line 5: Describing or Renaming (2 syllables)

APA Citation for Example Project learning tree: Pre K-8 environmental education activity guide. (2009). Washington D.C.: American Forest Foundation. Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Example Earth Worms Squiggly squirmers Aerating our topsoil Happily helping our garden Crawlers Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity 4 th graders shown a picture of a puppy (next slide) Develop a cinquain poem (about puppies) Use a graphic organizer. Work in groups of three Two groups share Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity Picture Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA. Maltese puppies for sale in Australia. ( ). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au:

Assessment Activity 4 th graders shown a picture of turtles (next slide) Work individually to create a cinquain poem (about turtles) Use graphic organizer Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment Activity Picture Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA. Nija Daniels Cinquain poetry: drafting, editing, revising, and publishing

ELA4W4. The student consistently uses a writing process to develop, revise, and evaluate writing. The student a. Plans and drafts independently and resourcefully. GPS Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

b. Revises selected drafts to improve coherence and progression by adding, deleting, consolidating, and rearranging text. c. Edits to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, etc. GPS Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Students will transfer information constructed on the graphic organizer into cinquain poetry form. Students will change, add, delete, rearrange content on their draft and look for mechanical errors. PLOs Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Students will finalize their cinquain poem for publication. PLO Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Stage of Writing: Drafting, Editing, Revising, Publishing Copy the information from your graphic organizer to a sheet of paper Be sure to put each lines on separate lines on your paper Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Check for cinquain poetry format Correct number of syllables Correct form for each line Mechanical errors Capitalization, spelling and punctuation. Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Copy the revised and edited poem on a new sheet of paper Include drawing or picture appropriate to the title Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

APA Citation for Example (2010). Retrieved from resources/lesson_images/less on43/RWT016-1.PDF Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Example Penguin black white waddling, swimming, leaping a tuxedo in the cold water emperor Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity Get into groups Look at the picture on the next slide Practice writing a cinquain poem APA citation Maltese puppies for sale in Australia. ( ). Retrieved April 5, 2010, from pups4sale.com.au: se_pups.htm Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Practice Activity Picture Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment Look at picture on the next page Individually (as fourth graders) write a cinquain poem Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.

Assessment Activity Picture Brown, J. and Daniels, N. (2010). Cinquain Poetry. Unpublished PowerPoint, Valdosta State University, Valdosta, GA.