2008 年高考英语写作训练 句子结构 隆湖中学高三备课组

Read the following sentences and analyze the elements in each and write out other sentences with the same structure 1 ） The man is a foreigner. 2) He lives in China. 3) He teaches English. 4) He brings the students post cards. 5) He asks them to write the post cards. 6) There are 3 birds in the post cards.

Add necessary modifiers to each sentence 1 ） The very old man is a foreigner from The USA. 2) He lives with his sixty-year-old wife happily in China. 3) He teaches English from morning to afternoon in a village school in the west of China. 4) He brings the lovely students many new year post cards. 5) He asks them to write the post cards in English carefully at class. 6) There are 3 beautiful birds in the post cards.

Add more necessary modifiers to each sentence 1 ） The very old man usually in a red woolen sweater made in China is a foreigner from The USA. 2) Every day, he lives with his sixty-year-old wife happily in China. 3) Just like other teachers, he teaches English from morning to afternoon in a village school in the west of China. 4)To my surprise, he often brings the lovely students many new year post cards. 5) There are 3 beautiful birds singing and dancing in the trees near the lake in the post cards. 6) He asks them to write the post cards in English carefully at the end of the class.

1 ） The very old man usually in a red woolen sweater made in China is a foreigner from The USA. 2) Every day, he lives with his sixty-year-old wife happily in China. 3) Just like other teachers who work very hard, he teaches English from morning to afternoon in a village school in the west of China. 4)To my surprise, he often brings the lovely students whose parents find jobs in the cities many new year post cards. 5) There are 3 beautiful birds singing and dancing in the trees near the lake in the post cards. 6) He asks them to write the post cards in English by themselves carefully at the end of the class.

The very old man usually in a red woolen sweater made in China is a foreigner from The USA. Every day, he lives with his sixty-year-old wife happily in China. Just like other teachers who work very hard, he teaches English from morning to afternoon in a village school in the west of China. To my surprise, he often brings the lovely students whose parents find jobs in the cities many new year post cards. There are 3 beautiful birds singing and dancing in the trees near the lake in the post cards. He asks them to write the post cards in English by themselves carefully at the end of the class.

Learning use AND in your writing practice 1.Wanglin and his roommates are school volunteers. 2.He comes from a remote village and lives in the students’ room. 3.He,as well as his classmate,Tim,helps some cooks in the school dinning hall and shop in his spare time every day. 4.He sometimes buy some fresh vegetables and a lot of meat from the school market with his mates. 5.He always washes the bowls and plates clean with running water and keep them dry in the micwave box. 6. There are three hundred students, boys and girls, having dinner in the hall everyday.

Wanglin and his roommates are school volunteers. He comes from a remote village and lives in the students’ room. He,as well as his classmate,Tim,helps some cooks in the school dinning hall and works in a shop in his spare time every day. He sometimes buys some fresh vegetables and a lot of meat from the school market with his mates. He always washes the bowls and plates clean with running water and keep them dry in the micwave box. There are three hundred students, boys and girls, having dinner in the hall everyday.

Mrs. Wang is a lay-off worker. She worked in an old factory in the city two years ago. At that time she made spare parts of the machine with other workers. There are five people in her family. She cooks them three dinners at home. Last night her husband asked her to find a new job for her.

书面表达（满分 25 分） (NMET07) 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师 Peter 找一个英语 笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件， 并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括： 1 ．年龄； 2 ．性别； 3 ．爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意： 1 ．词数 100 左右； 2 ． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 ． 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

第一步 : 审题 1. 文体 : 书信 ; 写信人 : 李华 ; 收信人 : 外籍教师 Peter ; 2. 书信结构 : 开头语已好 ; 主体 : 考生写 ; 结尾 : 考生写 ; 祝语 : 考生写 ; 署名 : 考生写 3. 内容 : 事由 : 找笔友 : 年龄 : 理想中的 ; 性别 : 理想中的 ; 以及为什么 ; 笔友的爱好 : 旅游、运动、宠物等 ; 4. 其他 : 词数 100 左右 ; 适当增加细节 : 突出目的 : 学习, 交流 --- 行文连贯

第二步 : 处理信息 1. 找男笔友, 和我同性 2. 和我同龄, 容易沟通 3. 笔友爱好旅游、运动、宠物等 4. 我喜欢散步, 养小狗 5. 找外籍笔友, 相互学习 6. 学习别国文化 第三步 : 翻译要点 1. I want to find a pen friend. The pen friend is a boy. I am a boy student. 2.The boy has the same age with me. We can communicate easily. 3.The boy likes swimming, traveling, walking. He likes pets. 4.I like walking, taking a little dog. I want to know how to take dogs. 5.I can learn English from him. 6.I can learn something about his country.

I want to find a pen friend. The pen friend is a boy. I am a boy student, too. I think the boy has the same age with me. In this way we can communicate easily in the letter. It is better if the boy likes swimming, traveling, walking,and so on. I am very glad if he likes pets. To tell you the truth, I like walking, taking a little dog very much and I want to know how to take dogs with his help. I can also learn English from him when I have an English speaking friend. I’m sure I can learn something interesting about his country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Li Hua

I want to find a pen friend who is a boy at the same age as mine because I am a boy student studing in a middle school. In this way I think we can communicate easily in the letter. It is better if the boy likes swimming,traveling, walking,and so on. I am very glad if he likes pets. In fact,I like walking, taking a little dog very much and I want to know how to take dogs with his help. I can also learn English from him when I have an English speaking friend. I’m sure I can learn something interesting about his country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Li Hua

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Li Hua

第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分） (NMET07Tianjing) 假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为 “How to Protect Our Eyesight” 。请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并 从阅读时间、光线、眼睛保健及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护视力的具体 方法。 注意： 1 ．词数：不少于 100 词； 2 ．可适当加入细节，以便使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 近视 — short-sighted How to Protect Our Eyesight