Half-Caste Roots and Water

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Essay Write about the poem and its effect on you. You may wish to include some or all of these points: the poem's content - what it is about the ideas the poet may have wanted us to think about the mood or atmosphere of the poem how it is written - words or phrases you find interesting, the way the poem is structured or organized, and so on your response to the poem

Essay Plan Essay title: Essay topic: Introduction: Who is the poet? What is the poem about? Section: (use the bullet points which accompany your essay title as a guide) Paragraph 1 – What are some ideas conveyed in the poem? P: E: Paragraph 2 - What is the mood/atmosphere of the poem? Etc... Section: Paragraph 3- Discuss the language used by the poet. Aim to discuss the use of poetic devices such as metaphors and similes. Conclusion: Did you like the poem? Why or why not? Summarise your 3 main points.

Introduction ‘Half-Caste’ was written by ________________. The poem is about ______________________________________________________________________________________________________. The poet’s mother was _______________ and his father was ____________, and the family moved to _____________ when John was a child. As a result, he grew up in a culture which referred to him as _________________.

Paragraphs Every paragraph you write must follow this structure: P point – this is your topic sentence which tells the reader what your paragraph is about. E evidence – this is a quotation or example which proves your point. E explain – this is where you explain why you have made your point, and how your evidence shows that you are right. L – Provide a link back to the essay question

Paragraphs Example paragraph 1: P - ‘Charlotte O’Neil’s song’ encourages the reader to think about ideas such as the injustices of the class system. E Charlotte O’Neil gets treated really badly as a result of being poor and having to work as a maid. This is evident when it says, “You lay on a silken pillow. I lay on a cot.” It is then stated that, “the poor deserve the gate.” E This shows us that Charlotte O’Neil did not have as nice things as her master. Her master believes she deserves this just because she is poor. L – The reader responds by feeling sympathy for Charlotte O’Neil at first and then very proud of her when she stands up to her boss.

Paragraphs Example paragraph 1: P - ‘Charlotte O’Neil’s song’ encourages the reader to think about ideas such as…. E This is evident when….. E This shows us that….(explain what the quote tells us about this idea) L – The reader responds by feeling…..

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