Grade Nine: Revision Make your passage more beautiful( 1 )

2.A lot of people lost their lives. 结构２ : S + V + O( 宾语 ) + 其它 1.The earthquake in Wenchuan took place on May 12 th. 结构 1 ： S( 主语 ) + V( 谓语 ) + 其它 3.Many people became homeless. 结构 3: S+ 系动词 + 表语 4. Love makes the world warm. 结构４ : S + V +O + 宾补 Step1: 学习六种基本句型 :

5.My parents always give me a lot of care and love. 结构３ : S + V +O( 人 )+O( 物 ) + 其它 6.There are a lot of people showing their love to others now. 结构 6 ： There be + 主语 + 地点状语句型 （存在句：表示在某处有某人或某物 )

There are many students are playing on the playground. 主语 现在分词, 补充说明, 做后置定语 1.There are many students playing on the playground. 3.There are many students who are playing on the playground. 2.Many students are playing on the playground. 定语从句

Step 2:Make a new sentence by using these words. 1. rises the sun every day in the east The sun rises in the east every day. 2. every day visit the Bird’s Nest a lot of people A lot of people visit the Bird’s Nest every day. 3.the weather now colder and colder is getting The weather is getting colder and colder now.

4. can having sports keep us healthy Having sports can keep us healthy. 6. a lot of students there are on the playground running There are a lot of students running on the playground. The 2010 Expo will bring Shanghai a lot of chances. 5. the 2010 Expo a lot of chances Shanghai will bring

Step3 :Correct the mistakes in the following sentences 1. Peter and I went skating last friday. Friday 2. Let’s go to the supermarket to buy some flower. flowers 3. I’ve got a pen-friend and I like she very much. her 4. I’m looking forward to receive your letter. receiving Have a try!

6.Underground trains can’t run as quick as planes. quickly 5. Helping others are a good habit. is 7. We should brave to face the difficulties. be brave 8.Nowadays a lot of foriegners come to Shanghai for travelling. foreigners

A Trip to Hainan Island Last winter holidays, my parents and I go to Hainan Island for sightseeing. We went there by air. It was the first time for me to take the plane, So I felt a little exciting. We stayed at a 3-star hotel which offers we good services. We were deeply attracted by the beautiful beach. What’s more, I met with many tourist from other countries and talked about them in English. How meaningful the trip was ! Although the whether there was really hot,I still like the trip very much.

错误类型 典型错误 正确表达 …my parents and I go to… 时态运用 …my parents and I went to…,So I felt a little… 首字母大小写,so I felt a little … I felt a little exciting. 形容词运用 I felt a little excited. which offers we good services. 代词运用 which offers us good services. I met with many tourist. 名词单复数 I met with many tourists. …talked about them in English. 介词运用 …talked with them in English. Although the whether there was very hot, I still like the trip very much. 单词拼写 Although the weather there was very hot, I still like the trip very much.

An unforgettable person My grandfather is a unforgetable person, Because he is a doctor and very busy. He was saved many people’s lives. And he was called ‘Angles in White’. He was did many useful things with our country. He’s contributions is very big. And he hopes I can like him to be an useful man. From now on, I must study hard to be an unforgettable person like my grandfather. An example 1. Read the passage and circle （ 圈出 ） the mistakes in it.

Items 运用正确 √ 若表达错误，请将正确答案填入表格中 首字母大小写 标点符号 ….person because he is 单词拼写 名词单复数 人称运用 His contributions … 主谓一致 His contributions are 动词运用 I can be like him… 介词运用 …did many useful thing to our country 冠词运用 形容词, 副词的使 用 习惯用法 时态运用 He has saved many people’s… √ √ √ He did many useful things…. an unforgettable person / a useful man unforgettable 2.Finish the table according to the mistakes √

成文之前： 一定：主题 二定：时态 三定：人称 四定：要点 成文之后： 一查：单词拼写 二查：名词单复数 三查：标点符号 四查：主谓一致 五查：固定搭配 Some Tips for writing ：

I can always feel love around me. My parents remember to celebrate my birthday every year. My classmates always help me when I am in trouble. I’m deeply touched by them. As we all know, the earthquake in Wenchuan took place on May 12th. A lot of people lost their lives and many people became homeless. It is time to show our love. I’m going to write letters to those poor children and let them know they are not alone. Love will always stay with them because our society is like a big family. Love around me ____________________ _____________________ __________________________________________ ____________

Homework : Write your composition on the sheet again and try to make it more beautiful.

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me” ( 以 “ 我身边的爱 ” 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文, 标点符号不占格 ) Use the following points as a guide.( 短文须包含下列要点 )  Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)  How do you feel when you get love from him / her /them?  What are you going to do to show your love?