Chapter 6: Writing the Front Matter and Executive Summary
Step 7: Front Matter and Executive Summary I. The Front Matter II. The Executive Summary III. Common Errors
The Front Matter Cover (transmittal) Letter Title Page Proprietary Notice Table of Contents List of Illustrations and Tables Additional Front Matter
Cover (transmittal) letter A page or two in length and consist of at least three paragraphs The opening paragraph: provides a brief statement or summary of your marketing strategy or theme The middle paragraph: offers a brief statement of the unique selling point that will meet and exceed the client’s needs. explain any special research or other efforts you took to identify critical requirements in the RFP, or additional client needs you spotted The closing paragraph: include references to the RFP number and project name; length of time, a statement verifying the firm; name and address of the firm
Common format of title page are: response to requirement the client’s name and address and the name of the person who signs the RFP submitted by proposal number controlled document number date
Nondisclosure statement appears on the bottom of each page Help to protect your information from competitors and others who may use it without your permission and without giving you credit (USA: the federal Freedom of Information Act)
List of all the major sections and subsections in your proposal Use Roman numeral or numbered format for short table of contents/single-volume proposal Include TOCs from all the volumes in the first one and subsequent volumes generally list only their own content
Follow the Table of Content Should be printed on separate pages unless they are very short; then it Can appear on a single page with table of content
Abbreviation List Compliance Matrix and Exceptions List Explanatory preface (how to read this proposal)
Who read the Executive Summary? Outline of the Executive Summary Introduction Opening Paragraphs Program Design Technical Approach Project Management Plan Implementation, Monitoring, Maintenance Training Time/Cost Corporate Profile Future Product and Other Elements
demonstrate your grasp of the client’s problem sell your solution and its benefits over your competitors’ solution and Benefits educate the client about your firm and its products, staff, and resources explain your program design and its outstanding features and benefit in more detail translate complex technical concepts, products, or processes into readily understandable term present pertinent information not requested in the RFP reinforce how the client will benefit by giving your firm do the job
Top executive or executive group with the authority to award the job Evaluation staffs the focus in on results and value for price rather than on how the result will be achieved Answer series of questions: What is your solution? Why was that solution chosen and how did you arrive at it? What are the details of the solution (usually, the technical aspects)? How will the project be managed? What happens after the project is finished? How much time and money will it require? Who is your firm and why do you believe you can do the job?
Introduction Program design Technical approach Project management plan Implementation, monitoring, maintenance Training Time/cost Company profile Future products or services
Put yourself in the decision-maker’s shoes What would I want to know from this executive summary? What would grab my attention and keep me reading? Opening paragraphs: start off selling your solution and must accomplish three goals Restate the client’s primary problem or goal and set the tone for the proposal Present your firm’s solution or promise to meet the goal Establish the proposal theme, which is reinforced throughout each section
State briefly how and why you develop this particular solution Why did we choose this solution? How did we develop it? Show that you understand not only what is requested in the RFP but also the problems associated with finding the right solution
The client must have a good grasp of the main features of the solution and be able to determine if they meet the requirements of the RFP What are the detail of the solution? (explain key terms and keep all technical jargon and detail to minimum)
The more complex or technical the project, the more important a solid management plan becomes Answer the following questions: How will the project be managed? Who will be on the project team? What responsibilities will each member assume? What will the proposed schedule be? How will your firm and client personnel interact?
Clients must determine their return on investment based not only on initial costs but on implementation and maintenance expenses as well This section is critical when companies win jobs in areas where they do not have adequately trained maintenance personnel when they bid products that have not been fully tested when they are caught short of staff and funding due to rapid growth or merger Many clients include penalty clauses if their new system is down Answer the question “what happens after the project is finished?” Remember: strong customer service can be the value-added feature that helps you stand out from the competition
The firm provide the training needed to make workers skilled for the client: Your training staff and their qualifications Type of instruction you use Provisions for training at your facility or on site at the client’s location Follow-up training for those who require it Time/Cost Optional feature (but can be the most persuasive sections) Offer you an opportunity to present alternative schedules and cost Structure Explain any deviations from the RFP
When the company was founded and a statement of its mission/objective A brief history of the company’s development to the industry Types of equipment/products/services you provide Company organization and the features and benefits of that Location of headquarters and division, and number of employees
Include a final section outlining what you believe to be future spinoffs or directions the company could take base on the current proposed project Demonstrate your company’s ability to keep pace with current changes in technology, marketing, and resource
Forgetting who the primary audience is Writing an opening paragraph that is too general and/or too negative Going into too much detail regarding how results will be achieved Including material that the RFP has expressly stated should not be included Using too many technical terms or jargon Using too many graphics or additional materials