Unit Six : Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases Українська навчальна система написання текстів в комп'ютерній мережі. Знищуйте багатослівні та непотрібні фрази

Багато технічних документів завантажені багатослівними та непотрібними фразами, що можуть бути знищені або виражені простіше. Авторові потрібно запобігати надмірної кількості слів або непотрібних фраз, що роблять речення довшими.

Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? nInIt is well known that a majority of Taguchi method applications have the capacity for addressing a single-response problem. nRnRevised: Most Taguchi method applications can address a single-response problem.

nInIt may be said that computers have the ability to incorporate kinds of equipment in order that the user is in a position to interact with the computer. nRnRevised: Computers can incorporate equipment so that the user can interact with the computer.

nInIt is the operator who makes a determination of the questions as to the phase should be implemented. nRnRevised: The operator determines whether to implement the phase.

nTnThere is a guideline that makes a provision of the necessary requirements. nRnRevised: A guideline provides the requirements.

nInIt has been found that any error that might happen will be more destructive in light of the fact that XYZ applications is in a position to make direct calls to the hardware. nRnRevised: Any possible error will be more destructive since XYZ applications can make direct calls to the hardware.

nInIt has long been known that the logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted considering the fact that an eavesdropper actually wants to gain the ID and password. nRnRevised: The logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted because an eavesdropper wants to gain the ID and password.

nInIt is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all intents and purposes a good operating system in a situation in which the user has many requirements. nRnRevised: We believe that Windows 95 is a good operating system when the user has many requirements.

nInIt is possible that the error affects the necessary requirements when attempting to ascertain the location of the variables. nRnRevised: The error might affect the requirements when attempting to find the variables.

nInIt is noted that 10Mbps network cards are basically becoming obsolete for the reason of their slow data transfer rates. nRnRevised: 10Mbps network cards are becoming obsolete because of their slow data transfer rates.

nInIt is interesting to note that monitoring features in most cases inform the user provided that a performance bottleneck occurs. nRnRevised: Notably, (OR Interestingly,) monitoring features usually inform the user if a performance bottleneck occurs.