Cat Nap Fishing!!! Continuing a story.

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Cat Nap Fishing!!! Continuing a story

Your Task Write the rest of the story of the Cat Nap Fishing! Think about the man’s reaction. Think about his actions. What happens to the Cat? What happens to the Fish? What happens to the tea?!

Success Criteria Remember that our Success Criteria is split into different sections to help us. At the end of the task go back and check it through using the Success Criteria. You can do this at another time before it is handed in. For Mums and Dads helping at home, there is a dictionary on the Website of some of the vocabulary to refresh your memories 

Content and Layout Describe the character’s reactions Describe the setting

Language Write in 3rd person throughout Write in present tense Use a variety of sentence starters Use a variety of connectives

Punctuation and Spelling Use commas correctly Use a semi colon correctly Use plurals accurately y-ies

What Has Happened? The cat tries to take the fish when the man is asleep. But it doesn’t go as the cat had planned, it goes horribly wrong.

Lets piece this story together! Nick is peacefully snoring while Tiddles the cat is snooping behind the sofa.

Sneakily Tiddles dips his paw in the bowl while keeping an eye on Nick.

Boldly, Forcing his paws into the bowl, he smothers the fish.

Suddenly Everything goes terribly wrong, instead of Tiddles getting the fish, he lands in the bowl!

Amazingly The tiny fish lands straight in the tea cup with a shivering startling splash.

Unaware Nick wakes up wondering why he is soaking wet.

After Shaking the water off he gives an enormous stretch.

Thirstily He takes a humungous gulp from his tea cup.

“Yeugh! This tastes fishy, did I buy the wrong tea? I always by PG Tips!”

Your Turn!

Your Task Write the rest of the story of the Cat Nap Fishing! Think about the man’s reaction. Think about his actions. What happens to the Cat? What happens to the Fish? What happens to the tea?!