Pingyang No. 2 Vocational School Catherine How to do Proof-reading April 10th, 2007

1.We all had a good time today. 2. I can return to school now. 3. I like playing piano. 4. I major at accounting. the Wrong word ∧ Missing word in to Unnecessary word √right word

Now here are the weather report for our city. Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 ℃ in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be － 8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall down to － 10 ℃. You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, you’d better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong wind

3 steps of doing proof-reading 1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.( 浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. （分句阅读，逐行找错） 3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）

项目 年度 正确多词多词缺词缺词错词 ２００４ １ 1 ０８ ２００５ 1 １１７ ２００６ １ 1 １７ 改错命题统计

年度 介词介词 动词动词 形容 词或 副词 代词代词 名词名词 连词连词 冠词冠词 总计总计 ２００４１２１１１１２９ ２００５４２１０１０１９ ２００６１３２１１１０９ 错误类型统计 测试点

动词形，名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾． A Limerick

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily 高职考试题目链接

3 steps 1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.( 浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. （分句阅读，逐行找错） 3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）

This passage is about______ A. Jim’s family. B. Christmas lights. C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve. C

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._____ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._____ a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! 3._____ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._____ ____ on _________ chose _______ tall _______ it 动词形 介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住 还要注意形和副 代词格，细领悟

room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._____ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. ____ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. ________ a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas 8. ____ tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his 9. ____ parents singing and dancing happily. 10.____ ＼ was ＼ _______ lights _____________ beautiful _____ and √ ∧ were 动词形 还要注意形和副 动词形 名词数 冠词连词须关注

Four points that you should pay attention to ①标点符号不改. ②大小写不改. ③词序错误不改. ④在纲外生词不改 ( 带汉语注释的词 ).

Discussion What did you learn from this lesson?

1.He who makes no mistakes ， makes nothing ． 不犯错误的人必然一事无成。 2. By ignorance we mistake, and by mistakes we learn ． 吃一堑 长一智。 3. A stupid person always tries to justify himself for his mistakes; but a wise man tries his best to correct his errors. 愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护，聪明的人则力求改正 。 4.Don't make the same mistake twice. 不要重复犯同样的错误。 Proverbs

Homework Finish the exercises on the paper.

Byebye!

一、动词形 1. 动词的时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致的错误。 高考链接１： When the air move, we have wind. moves

二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。 高考链接 2 ： We write to each other all the times. time

三、还要注意形和副 １．修饰名词， be 动词，系动词要用形容词 ２．修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词 ３．比较级和最高级的使用 高考链接３： It is still hardly for me to write in English. hard

四 、 代词格，细领悟 1. 人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词 oneself 的使用． ３．人称代词的主格和宾格．４．不定代词的使用． ５． Both, all, either, neither, none 的使用. 6. Whose 和 who’s ， its 和 it’s 的区别． 高考链接４： I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term. us

五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住． 主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。 高考链接５： The man is sitting next his son. to ∧

１. 冠词 a, an 和 the 的用法错误． ２．连词 but ， and ， or, so 和 although 的用法错误． 高考链接６： 1.What a good news we’ve heard. 2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able to come tonight. but 六、冠词连词常光顾 a

This passage is mainly about _____________________________. the weather report in our city

Now here are the weather report for our city. Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 ℃ in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be － 8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall down to － 10 ℃. You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, you’d better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong wind

Now here are the weather report for our city. 1. _____ Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 2. _____ 3 ℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature 3. ______ will fell down below zero. The temperature 4. _____ will be － 8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there 5. _____ is a evening fall after

will be the strong wind and the temperature will 6. ____ be low. It will fall down to － 10 ℃. You had 7. ____ better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a 8. ____ driver, you’d better be more carefully when 9. ____ you are driving because the strong wind. 10. ____ a √ to ＼ ＼ careful of ∧