Mi viajo (Check spelling) a la(not necessary to say “My trip to the Seaside” since Sea Side is a proper noun) Sea Side By: Mike Lewis

En el automovil En el automovil, hay muchas bolsas de maletas(makes no sense. “In the car, there are a lot of bags of suitcases). Nosotros fuistimos (check verb “ir” in preterite) muchas esatcion (check spelling) de gasolinas. Nosotros molestamos mi amigos madre (check word order = needs to be “ the friends of my mother”) tambien.

A la hotel A la hotel(masculine), nosotros hemos descomprimido (USE PRETERITE TENSE AND CHECK VOCABULARY. WHAT IS “DESCOMPRIMIR”? nuestas bolsas. En la hotel (MASCULINE), mi (AGREES WITH AMIGOS) amigos y yo tenimos (CHECK IRREGULAR PRETERITE FORM OF TENER) muy (=“WE HAD VERY FOOD?) comida y fuistimos(CHECK PRETERITE VERB FORM OF “IR”) nadamos (SECOND VERB IS ALWAYS IN INFINITIVE FORM = WE WENT TO SWIM)

La Playa La playa era (USE PRETERITE TENSE) muy fantasico (CHECK SPELLING). La arena era calido (AGREES WITH ARENA, y el agua era muy entrecortado (MEANING OF ‘ENTRECORTADO”? NEVER HEARD OF IT..

Las restaurantes A la(NOT NECESSARY) Sea Side, las(A MASCULINE WORD)restaurantes era(USE PRETERITE AND CHECK SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT muy delicioso (AGREES WITH RESTAURANTES). La comida de(DOESN’T NEED “DE”) Italiano (AGREES WITH LA COMIDA) era (USE PRETERITE TENSE) muy bien. Yo odio la comida de mar (FIND WORD FOR “SEAFOOD”).

El Paseo Maritimo En el paseo maritimo, hay muchas hacieron (MAKES NO SENSE = ON THE BOARDWALK THERE ARE A LOT “HACIERON = NOT A WORD). Hay muchas (NEEDS TO AGREE WITH THE NOUN IT:’S MODIFYING) paseos, montana rusas NEEDS TO AGREE WITH THE NOUN IT:’S MODIFYING), y arcadas. El paseo maritimo era muy diversion (USE ADJECTIVE. THIS SAYS “THE BOARDWALK WAS VERY ENTERTAINMENT).

Volver a la(DOESN’T NEED TO SAY THE RETURN TO “THE” SUFFERN) Suffern En el volvimos (= IN THE WE RETURNED) a la (DOESN’T NEED TO SAY THE RETURN TO “THE” SUFFERN) Suffern, nosotros fuitimos (NOT A VERB – CHECK FORM) a la (NEEDS MASCULINE) centro de Palisades. A la (NEEDS MASCULINE)centro de Palisades, fuistimos (NOT A VERB) a el (A + EL = ?) cine y miraron (THEY LOOKED? OR WE LOOKED?) una pelicula. Despues la pelicula, fuistimos (NOT A VERB) a la casa de mi amigo y jugaron THEY PLAYED OR WE PLAYED futbol de (DOES NOT NEED “DE”) americano. Eso (NEEDS A VERB HERE) mi vacacion (VACATION IS ALWAYS A PLURAL WORD IN SPANISH) en el invireno (CHECK SPELLING)